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lovely
more, please!!
Part 2
Part 2 is pending! I'm sorry I didn't mention it would be multiple chapters, but it'll take a bit to build up. I promise more sexy things!
Aaack, crap!!! I'm so sorry!!!
I totally hit the wrong star button, and gave it a 1 instead of a 5. I really loved it, and hope you'll continue. This is VERY well written and almost completely free of errors. But more than that, your voice just leaps off the page! I promise I'll be more careful in my rating with the next chapter, just don't stop posting :(
I'm excited for part 2!
love love love this!!!
It was very well written and already has me wet with anticipation. I will be impatiently awaiting additional parts keep up the good work. ^_^
Great start
And I'm sure it'll just keep getting hotter...
Very rich and vivid !
A very intriguing start to what seems to be a rather unique story. The writer's ability to transport the reader smack dab into the middle of the action is unsurpassed ! Can't wait to read more !
Lovely in a strange way
And it has potential. I'll keep an eye open for the sequels.
Well done kit!
Pain isn't really my thing, but Alanna's submission was very hot. Beautifully written!
Yummy
Great start to this story! It leaves me hungry for more...
xx
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