Unknown Love Ch. 03

Damn it!!

No, no, no. Dont stop there...more pls

More

Please more, and longer

More PLEASE!

God you're such a good writer. They're relationship is so hot. I also think i died a little when you managed to squeeze in Firefly. That's one of my favorite shows.

Looking forward to more.

Good story, except I would like more details about the relationship between Jaime and Kyle. You sort of gloss over small glimpses into their day to day activities that would allow the readers to witness the depth of connection Alex sees.

I'm hooked

Looking forward to more.

That's really unfair of alex to ask that he sit there and watch them together when he has feelings for jamie. He should try to intercept it now. And i'd question wanting to be with Jamie if he could drop his good friend for the bf right away. and what happens when they get together and gavin shows up again...will jamie go right back. Kyle is setting himself up for trouble and heartbreak---aren't i the romantic!! :)
Cannd

really good

this story is pulling me in