Keep going!!!! I want to know what happens next!!!!!!!
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Anonymous02/02/15
i have read a lot of short stories online and i really like your style and how fluent you are and i am vary intrested in finding out where this go's so im hoping you post more soon.
Good first submission!
I'm interested to see where this goes!
Really Good!!!
Keep going!!!! I want to know what happens next!!!!!!!
i have read a lot of short stories online and i really like your style and how fluent you are and i am vary intrested in finding out where this go's so im hoping you post more soon.
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