Your story is really good, but I would suggest that you either find an editor or a proofreader. There are a lot of typographical errors and missed words that would really improve the way the story reads if they were corrected.
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Anonymous02/02/15
Your writing is perfect...
I am enjoying it immensely. Thank you for sharing your creativity. I look forward to more!
I am really enjoying this story. Can not wait to read the next chapter. I like the story so much that it went straight in to my favorites. Keep writing pretty please.:-)
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A suggestion...
Your story is really good, but I would suggest that you either find an editor or a proofreader. There are a lot of typographical errors and missed words that would really improve the way the story reads if they were corrected.
Your writing is perfect...
I am enjoying it immensely. Thank you for sharing your creativity. I look forward to more!
*whispers* I want a Vampire Daddy!
brilliant
I am really enjoying this story. Can not wait to read the next chapter. I like the story so much that it went straight in to my favorites. Keep writing pretty please.:-)
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