I like it. The surprise ending took a nice, sexy, but unrealistic fantasy, and made it feel more believable. Not that fantasies have to be believable, but I just like it better that way. Thanks!
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Anonymous04/05/15
Fuck me Some More
I really like your direct writing style! Why fuck around when the subject is fucking????? If we are going to fuck then let's get our clothes off, our pussies wet and our cocks hard and get the fuck with it!!!!!
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By the way - I may have some interest in fucking you!
English
pushing the envelope
Very hot little tale, thank you for sharing. Hoping for more...
Good job!
It was short and simple, with a hot quickie. I gave it a 4.
Whoa
That short story packed a punch. Took no time for me to get a boner. Nice job.
Excellent!
Fabulous job with your first submission! I would love to read about more of your thrilling fantasies!
Hot and Wet
Is what reading this did to me.
Intense
Extremely well done for your first story.
I hope we will hear more from you soon.
Bueno
I like it. The surprise ending took a nice, sexy, but unrealistic fantasy, and made it feel more believable. Not that fantasies have to be believable, but I just like it better that way. Thanks!
Fuck me Some More
I really like your direct writing style! Why fuck around when the subject is fucking????? If we are going to fuck then let's get our clothes off, our pussies wet and our cocks hard and get the fuck with it!!!!!
Fucking and creampied pussies is what this fucking world is all about, isn't it?????
By the way - I may have some interest in fucking you!
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