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Short and sweet
Great descriptive passages and a clever ending.
5 star all the way!!!!
Thank you for your email
Thanks for the feed back, Bill. I have more. I will try and get more of them on Literotica. Again, thanks for the kind words. -tariail
well written story
This is what I call Erotica. Very well written and very erotic.
Love It!
Well-written and quite erotic! Vivid, yet simple and sexy description of the heat between the two of them and the actions that follow. Love how it isn't full of the typical words used for the body that can sometimes make a piece of writing seem "low." Thank you!
TLA
You flatter me. Love you, Dean..
P.S. Who the fuck is Bill?
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