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Great job
Can't wait for 4 and 5
Excellent Story!
I Hope Meghan gets close to Her Brother as Denise has! Several More Chapters, Please!
So freakin' weird--ish
Nutty story written by a nut.
Obviously a dude. The "she started to come almost immediately" gives that away. Yeah.
Then we get into the Choking. Hmm. Freaking nutjob. Can't say there was anything "safe" about that. Some dude finding out he gets turned on by choking women.
Story has no rhyme or reason, really. Not a crafted piece of fiction. A wanna-be writer. Actually just someone masturbating out loud to random ideas.
bastard
Choking his sister. Taking her sex by force. What, did he think she owed him something? Training his niece to be a submissive. This guy's an asshole and a bastard. Spanking her in front of her mother after drinking wine. If this is your idea of erotica, you need something in your life.
Lonely idiots
First off to the last comments (afraid someone will recognize them....pathetic)...I can assure you...I am all woman! This story is great! The fact of the matter is, neither of you have any kind of imagination. If you feel this story lacks something....start writing your own stuff. Personally, I love the choking and yes...the immediate orgasmic pleasure that she was experiencing....can and does totally happen!!! My husband does it to me all the time. Now just because apparently neither of you have found the one that you can do this with....doesn't mean that it doesn't actually happen for other people.
Dont listen to those morons Kethandra...keep writing. I can't wait to finish the whole story. I even sent it to my husband to check out!!! ;-)
Cliche, Unecessary, Stupid
The old lone mother fighting against the town “owners“? What is this, a nineties Danielle Steele book? Why this martyrdom, unecessary victimisation? No reason at all to use this ridiculous cliche. What did it add to the story? Nothing but a wild turn towards irrelevant clicheland. To the characters? Shit, Meghan toughness and reliability and her Mike reliability were shown and estabilished way earlier.
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