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Nice
Enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!
Not bad
As always foreplay between two female friends does allow for a good outcome for all three, having three male partners at the same time helped me, But in the end it was another female that made life complete.
Fun Story
Enjoyed it a lot. Noticed a misspell knell should have been knelt. If you wish some proofreading before putting future work out there, I'm on the Volunteer Editors List. Otherwise, well written.
Cheers!
I wish
I wish I could have voted as I really enjoyed your story. One suggestion: As Vicki, you are the narrator. So, don't precede your paragraphs with a "Vicki" to identify who is speaking because you are the speaker. So, the "Vicki" is redundant and confusing.
Enjoyable
Liked your build up and pictures of the characters
Credible
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