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My Accident Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/25/07

Nice..

I really enjoyed that :D

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by Anonymous06/20/08

good but

good but you need a dictionary or a good editor a lot of wrong words trying to read it gave me a headache

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by Anonymous05/29/11

SPELLING.........................

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by Anonymous12/11/11

Gazzing

That gazzing thing willl do it every time.

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by Anonymous06/27/12

Very nice lead in to part II

I loved it. I'm going on to part II. You might want to get a spell checker for your 'puter. But other than that, you were quite creative. Very good dialogue, so far.

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by Anonymous03/20/13

loved it, loved it, loved it!

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by Anonymous03/20/13

Fucking awful

Stop trying to write. You need to learn basic English.

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by Anonymous06/03/13

Pidgin English

Write in your native language, which obviously is not English.

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by Bfreetorun01/13/14

Mother/son sex is the best.

Never mind the naysayers who criticize your grammar, how many stories have they written?

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by Anonymous01/14/14

mmmmmmm

I loved it to.

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by Anonymous07/03/14

keep it up

i liked the way this story read a lot. thanks

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by Anonymous08/13/14

GAZZING ??

Shame you can't spell - gazzing ?? No wonder she was wet if you filled her with gaz !

Could be dangerous ! She could go off with a bing !!

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by Anonymous09/04/14

More

More more more more!

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by Anonymous12/08/14

more

can't wait to see the follow up.

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by Anonymous12/08/14

How dare you. It is all right that you really fucked your mom. But how dare you make a mistake on spelling gazzing wrong. Dont you know you are supposed to be as perfect as God. Im just kidding. Im pointing out that the frigging grammar freaks can all go straight to

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by Anonymous01/22/16

My Accident

My Accident chapter 1 is a very good read. I will read it again. Keep up the good work.

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by BPK24704/24/16

Keep Writing

I enjoyed reading your story. Yes, there are some grammar problems and spelling issues, but since your first language is German I think most of us need to consider your writing in a second language.

I know it would destroy the plot, but it would seem to me that it would've been easier just to sit down on the toilet and urinate. If you have an erection, your mom could hold the erection down so that it doesn't spill all over the floor.

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