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The Cheating Bride is Exposed

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by Tavadelphin02/23/15

Hmm intersting and very good -

To the point he takes up with Marie whose main concern when the bride was about to cheat was ?? Not enough time?? no more morals than the slut had???

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by Anonymous03/10/15

I gave it four stars...

... Obviously written tongue-in-cheek, it had an element of truth in it. Typically cheaters always blame others. Panther fan.

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by Pappy703/12/15

Dear Marie,

I am so glad that your plan to get Errol away from the slut worked. How did you ever talk her into inviting Dave to the wedding? And getting them together in her dressing room? Pure genius. I know you had a good honeymoon cruise and then the wedding, but whatever order it was in must have been good for you. I have never seen you looking better, but I guess that "glow of being pregnant" you talked about at the family reunion does explain a lot. Keep in touch and good luck.

Yours, Pappy

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by Anonymous03/19/15

Which is Worse

" I didn't want to believe she was the slattern others claimed." How does a Slattern compare with a Shameless Hussy? Worse? Not as bad?

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by phil221304/08/15

Short concise and powerfully fun

Well it was funny and outrageously implausible, but it made a point. A couple getting married should normally be at the apex of bliss and fidelity. As I have experienced, relationships usually take some time to tank. I guess that's the fun of this story in going against the grain by presenting a brain dead slut bride to a rock solid loyal hound dog groom. The groom picks up the scent of the interloper and bolts. This writer is extremely effective in smoothly casting the characters in synchronized harmony of the plot. Thank you for your five stars effort.

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