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Not one of the "Caught" stories?? LOL
I love when girlfriends get caught being naughty....especially by someone like Frank!! Keep up the volume....makes for a good start to the day!!
Maybe fewer stories?
Then maybe you'd get an okay one? This was just bad.
Twas all good!
Don't sweat the dissenting opinions, as this was good stuff. If I had to give any critiquing criticisms, there is some editing that needs to be done. That said, I more than got the gist- keep 'em coming, it was good work! :-)
Interesting . . .
how the nasty comments are always anonymous. It makes it so much easier to dismiss them as they deserve.
As always, a well crafted & amusing short story. I do enjoy your writing style & would very much like to see what you might do with a longer series allowing us to get to know some of your characters more intimately.
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