Whore

This worked because the lines have a frenetic pace to them.

Thank you greenmountaineer! I haven't put my writing out there for almost 15 years. Thank you for commenting :)

title and body

of the piece work perfectly. simple no apology asked none given,
the straightforward frantic pace driven by a hard rhyme and near rhyme, well written

I'll do all the dirty .....

In short , i'm your whore.... !
Killer lines Bette .

Short, sweet & filthy x

Nice job, you paint a vivid picture of the 'dripping and drenched whore' in a lovely compact poem x

THERE WAS NO PRICE MENTIONED

were these all freebies. TK U MLJ LV NV