My Sister... An Xmas Gift.

Rushed

It felt like I was on a train with platforms speeding by as the train got faster.

What happened to the Little Red Dress?

They get down to the basement and she's all dapper in her little red dress but when he starts undressing her she's suddenly wearing a shirt and a skirt? Sloppy stuff that should have jumped out on a proofread especially in such a short work.

I came 8 times whilereading

Took too long

you took too long to get to the "good" part. i have good in quotes because i expected there would be a lot more fucking and less of the crap that you have. and your consequence for doing that is that i'm not even gonna vote it one star; you get no vote from me. thanks for wasting my time asshole. now i have to go find another, hopefully way better incest story then this shit to jack off to. oh, and your title is very misleading. it makes it sound like it's gonna be a good story when in reality, it is not.

Very good story. Please continue with more chapters. I need to know how this story ends, does he leave his lush of a wife, do brother and sister and their respective kids all end up together? I need to know