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Dirty is different...
Once I got pass the oddity and stepped out of judgement, I saw that people with auditory hallucinations or mental illness (2 different things) have sexual desires too. The story ending was kinda endearing cause some people like Dirty - Lol
Makes One Wonder
The comments stories receive from my fellow readers forever make me wonder. About my fellow readers.
There are only a handful of real writers who contribute to this site. "Polynices"
Is one of them, and "Dirty" may well be the best story ever submitted here.
It is certainly the best short story I have read here.
Clever, innovative and compelling, it whirls and swirls like a dancer's bangles in the ibiza night. And haunts us with our own second sight.
Yet many readers do not see it so, and cannot taste it's shimmering light.
Which is incredibly dismaying.
A delicious sexual buffet,
Besides hitting many of my favorite kinks, this brought in an interesting & very foxy co-protagonist. Quite well written, Very visual & kinesthetic. I enjoyed this one a lot.
XOX,
Erin
Worthy of another chapter
I had to reread the first couple of paragraphs a couple of times to understand what was really happening. I like the concept a lot. It reminds me in some ways of Fight Club or Sixth Sense minus the fact that those plot twists were a third act reveal and in Dirty it was broadcast in the first few sentences.
I would really like to know if Amanda could actually see Dirty or if Jilly was just imagining that she could. If Amanda could in fact see her it would seem to indicate that something supernatural or extraterrestial was involved. In some ways I like that possibility a bit less than if Jilly is just projecting Amanda's acceptance from some kind of delusion. At the end of the story I thought maybe Amanda was another hallucination like Dirty, but realized that others had saw and talked to her. However the prospect of having a nasty slut opposing a more innocent girl as opposing pieces of Jilly's psyche was intriguing.
I would definitely be up for another chapter of Dirty.
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