Really that's dangerous. At least we know the owner isn't even half as devoted to her as she is him.
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Anonymous02/03/15
Solid writing for a first story, but it lacks emotion from any of the three characters you've given us. Still wondering about the backstory you hinted at. Why is this impersonal environment better than the kennels (whatever they are)? Her POV restricts information, yet I am wondering why her owner thought this guy was a good choice? I'm thinking he put more effort into the storage and car of his automobile while he is abroad than he did towards her care. I'm feeling sad for her.
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Really that's dangerous. At least we know the owner isn't even half as devoted to her as she is him.
Solid writing for a first story, but it lacks emotion from any of the three characters you've given us. Still wondering about the backstory you hinted at. Why is this impersonal environment better than the kennels (whatever they are)? Her POV restricts information, yet I am wondering why her owner thought this guy was a good choice? I'm thinking he put more effort into the storage and car of his automobile while he is abroad than he did towards her care. I'm feeling sad for her.
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