Better fit would be fetish. Not forming actual dialogue can work, but it was awkward here. The goddess and relic stuff was too much in such a short piece. Instead of setting the tone, it sounds pretentious. Do try again.
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Better fit would be fetish. Not forming actual dialogue can work, but it was awkward here. The goddess and relic stuff was too much in such a short piece. Instead of setting the tone, it sounds pretentious. Do try again.
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