Corey and Noah Ch. 01

Good start - keep going

Good start, would like to read the next chapter. :)

great job

Looking forward to reading more of your work. Great start!

That's It?

Not much there to like or dislike...

I MARKED YOU 5 STARS (86/100) BECAUSE YOU MASTERFULLY DESCRIBED THE ACTUAL SITUATION IN A HIGH SCHOOL

Having hots for Noah is Corey's sex life. It is not a glamorous sex life nut it is the best sex life he can have at present.
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Many of us, heterosexual or homosexual, popular or losers, rich or poor, wanted to befriend or date someone but never did because our priority was what other people think, rather than what we really really want.
If Corey is very very lucky, Noah might butt-fuck him as long as it can be s secret. Well secrets have forever been few and far in between; nowadays, with social media... you gotta be kidding. However anything is possible because events around us change in the ways we can not predict & quite often the outcome is better than we expected.
I BET THAT NOAH WILL POP COREY'S CHERRY... OPINION, ANYBODY?

Great Writing

Love the writing style! Please keep writing!

Very well written my friend. Keep it up. (5/5)

So relatable

Reminds of me, a year ago. High school's the most painful exercise of life. Love the vivid descriptions. Can't wait for part 2.

From the author...

Hey, this is the author, Shaneo here. I would love to recieve some feedback guys! I'm always looking to improve my writing and provide the best stories possible. Thank you if you have commented already.

Liked the story, but you need to learn the difference between, then and than, you used wrong one, also the difference between their, there and they're, another you got wrong.