Just unrelenting, senseless violence. I can't believe the site administrators allowed this to be posted. One of the worst stories EVER.
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Anonymous02/06/15
Russian men are brutes.
This is a brutal story, but I bet it is reality somewhere in Russia. I can easily see Russian men doing this type of stuff. Russian men are brutes! Drinking Vodka like it is water and abusing women.
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Anonymous02/07/15
yes write more
I like this new uptake s little hard core for this site. But I like this one hope you have more to come.
Though she was sold to these men, it was not willingly. I seem to see a theme in your BDSM stories: sold slaves. That does not make it consensual...at all. Someone forced into slavery by any means is still forced. Forced slavery is not BDSM. If this and some of your other stories was in non con I could see giving you a 4or5*. But here in BDSM 2* at best. Oh and her pussy longing for the drilling is not consent. You do know that during a rape a woman (and man being raped) can orgasm. That does not mean they wanted it or are consenting to it.
I meant to put this in non-con, I wasn't paying attention when I uploaded this and a few other stories. Also, my main bag is horror, so i guess that's why my erotica tends to be a bit boundary-pushing. If thats your thing then cool, if not then sorry and I hope you figured it out before my story upset you. This is just the product of what happens when a horror writer tries to rattle off a few erotic shorts for beer money XD it is also a very rough first draft, so later versions will most likely be toned down a tad.
I also LOVE the point one person made about consent. No, arousal does NOT mean consent, and it's really very encouraging as a woman to know that people know that and point that out. This is not a consensual story. This is really more of a horror story, with the horror written for titillation because uncomfortable juxtapositions are fun. But thank you for making that point, because it needed to be made
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Anonymous02/07/15
Awesome! I keep coming back again and again to read it. Perfectly written and makes me want more, maybe others experiencing the same. Keep writing!
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Anonymous02/27/15
Liked it!
I honestly liked this, it's hardcore and very to the point. Good job c:
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Anonymous03/09/15
More?
You're writing more, right? ;) What happens when it's time to stretch them more? Something I've always wished for is one of those machines with a head that expands. What happens when they are "ready to be movie star"? moremoremoremoremoremore
thanks
English
Wow!
Well written, grim, and to the point! Excellent!
OMG!
Twisted and disgusting
That was brutal!
Somehow, though ...
Thank you for being so open and honest.
Horrible garbage
Just unrelenting, senseless violence. I can't believe the site administrators allowed this to be posted. One of the worst stories EVER.
Russian men are brutes.
This is a brutal story, but I bet it is reality somewhere in Russia. I can easily see Russian men doing this type of stuff. Russian men are brutes! Drinking Vodka like it is water and abusing women.
yes write more
I like this new uptake s little hard core for this site. But I like this one hope you have more to come.
huh?
Though she was sold to these men, it was not willingly. I seem to see a theme in your BDSM stories: sold slaves. That does not make it consensual...at all. Someone forced into slavery by any means is still forced. Forced slavery is not BDSM. If this and some of your other stories was in non con I could see giving you a 4or5*. But here in BDSM 2* at best. Oh and her pussy longing for the drilling is not consent. You do know that during a rape a woman (and man being raped) can orgasm. That does not mean they wanted it or are consenting to it.
Author's note
I meant to put this in non-con, I wasn't paying attention when I uploaded this and a few other stories. Also, my main bag is horror, so i guess that's why my erotica tends to be a bit boundary-pushing. If thats your thing then cool, if not then sorry and I hope you figured it out before my story upset you. This is just the product of what happens when a horror writer tries to rattle off a few erotic shorts for beer money XD it is also a very rough first draft, so later versions will most likely be toned down a tad.
I also LOVE the point one person made about consent. No, arousal does NOT mean consent, and it's really very encouraging as a woman to know that people know that and point that out. This is not a consensual story. This is really more of a horror story, with the horror written for titillation because uncomfortable juxtapositions are fun. But thank you for making that point, because it needed to be made
Awesome! I keep coming back again and again to read it. Perfectly written and makes me want more, maybe others experiencing the same. Keep writing!
Liked it!
I honestly liked this, it's hardcore and very to the point. Good job c:
More?
You're writing more, right? ;) What happens when it's time to stretch them more? Something I've always wished for is one of those machines with a head that expands. What happens when they are "ready to be movie star"? moremoremoremoremoremore
thanks
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