You were lucky to get it. Most selfish women won't even do that and I should know, being married to one.
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Anonymous02/04/15
"She worked out a lot, bought sexy lingerie, and did the shoot.
And never wore the bras or little panties ever again." But now she's on an extended business trip, and . . . "It's her. And that's one of the bras she wore for the boudoir shoot." So, since she could not have know hubby would be asking for a selfie in her undies, for whom did she wear this special lingerie? And does she not realize its significance?
I think Mr. Big has problems Mrs. Vanilla is accidentally revealing. Maybe she's getting some Chocolate on the side? But wait, she doesn't like big cocks. Or maybe she just doesn't like big white cocks? Or maybe she just doesn't like cock? Or maybe the author just fucked up his plot. Can't wait to see if this story gets clever, or its just about a lame cheating slut.
He wants an adventurous or even normal sex life and she apparently finds it unpleasant/isn't interested - at least so far. I'm betting that this story will lead to one or the other - or maybe even both - getting some strange on the side. And it wouldn't be believable if the wife's personality all of a sudden changes from life time habit (and fifteen years with hubby) of shutting down any adventures in the marital bed and becomes the fabled wonton whore for him.
Just don't look at the foot of the bed off to Sweetie's left (the only part of the bed caught in the picture). If you look too closely, there is a foot-sized lump under the sheets! Maybe Sweetie left one of her shoes there?
Good start. Holding off on rating until subsequent chapters! Thanks for putting Ch1 in title!
Thanks for a very entertaining story, You seem to have captured the "old married woman" brilliantly,
I can't wait to see how well you succeed
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Anonymous02/08/15
For me, the set up took too long.....
....made it kind of a yawner.
I must say though, in spite of the somewhat crappy spelling and grammar, you paint an interesting, if impatient picture.
Hmm. Now I'm wondering where it will go from here.
Where will it go from here?
English
Where it would lead?
To a divorce stupid. Geez is anyone THAT dumb??
Surprised
You were lucky to get it. Most selfish women won't even do that and I should know, being married to one.
"She worked out a lot, bought sexy lingerie, and did the shoot.
And never wore the bras or little panties ever again." But now she's on an extended business trip, and . . . "It's her. And that's one of the bras she wore for the boudoir shoot." So, since she could not have know hubby would be asking for a selfie in her undies, for whom did she wear this special lingerie? And does she not realize its significance?
I think Mr. Big has problems Mrs. Vanilla is accidentally revealing. Maybe she's getting some Chocolate on the side? But wait, she doesn't like big cocks. Or maybe she just doesn't like big white cocks? Or maybe she just doesn't like cock? Or maybe the author just fucked up his plot. Can't wait to see if this story gets clever, or its just about a lame cheating slut.
Two mismatched people
He wants an adventurous or even normal sex life and she apparently finds it unpleasant/isn't interested - at least so far. I'm betting that this story will lead to one or the other - or maybe even both - getting some strange on the side. And it wouldn't be believable if the wife's personality all of a sudden changes from life time habit (and fifteen years with hubby) of shutting down any adventures in the marital bed and becomes the fabled wonton whore for him.
Mirror
Just don't look at the foot of the bed off to Sweetie's left (the only part of the bed caught in the picture). If you look too closely, there is a foot-sized lump under the sheets! Maybe Sweetie left one of her shoes there?
Good start. Holding off on rating until subsequent chapters! Thanks for putting Ch1 in title!
However
Get an editor ... or just use a spell-checker and a grammar checker. Really TOO many stupid errors ... made it hard to read!
You got my attention
Carry on. Like to see how this goes along.
Brilliant description of a married woman.
Hi,
Thanks for a very entertaining story, You seem to have captured the "old married woman" brilliantly,
I can't wait to see how well you succeed
For me, the set up took too long.....
....made it kind of a yawner.
I must say though, in spite of the somewhat crappy spelling and grammar, you paint an interesting, if impatient picture.
Hmm. Now I'm wondering where it will go from here.
Where will it go from here?
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