nice tale you wrote. no super human sex powers or sizes made your tale
nice to read. a little more about the cheaters may have been nice. you
just moved the trash out.
Nice gentle romantic pace, building tantalising options to consider, and then we saw the red; nice use of the title phrase in a way that was unexpected, considering his cool ejection of Karen, yet fit perfectly as the next chapter of his life unfolded.
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nice tale
nice tale you wrote. no super human sex powers or sizes made your tale
nice to read. a little more about the cheaters may have been nice. you
just moved the trash out.
Yes indeed
Nice gentle romantic pace, building tantalising options to consider, and then we saw the red; nice use of the title phrase in a way that was unexpected, considering his cool ejection of Karen, yet fit perfectly as the next chapter of his life unfolded.
Good Romantic Story****
But damn some of the food that was served made me hungry. Thanks for sharing.
Please.....
Follow up to this excellent start!
Beautiful Story
Perfect as is. It was a gentle, sweet, and very real journey. Thank you.
Finally
Getting the 'air' cleared' and the truth revealed - they were fortunate
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