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Thanks
To Yoshimatsu and Gaius Petronius and you for this chapter. Life will be different, emptier, after the next chapter.
I'll remember these people for a long time.
Stand and deliver!
This chapter is an important piece of the complete storyline. To flesh out the characters of Williams family.
YUM
New here..
Would love to know what you all think of YUM...love Flower Girl BTW
So real,
It almost reads like an autobiography.
Its coming togather nicely
This chapter pulled me back in. I appreciated that Tracy and William agreed things were moving fast. I was thinking the same and was puzzled it appeared to be normal and above serious inspection. I was afraid they were confusing the inital rush of a new relationship to something that is tested over time. I really enjoyed seeing the couple grow in this chapter. I am thinking they just might make it. Oh, I LOVE Vera, and I relate to Andy on more levels than I care to admit. Did I say I LOVE Vera? Looking forward to the grand finish!!
"Gait"
The pace of one's movement is a "gait", not a "gate." But, please, don't let this correction indicate that it spoiled a perfect story. Your storytelling skills - in both the main and Andy/Vera story - are superb. Thank you!
I hope the next
(and last) chapter is very long.
Hilarious!
I laughed out loud at the line: "I want to lick your pussy while we set up a college fund for Jr." Fuck, that's funny.
SoMike (because I'm too lazy to sign in on my phone).
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