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Oh yes this is good
I need this really honestly. Great detail and very arousing. Could really enjoy reading more about massage or find out if your male character got some relief.
Heavy sigh....
Now - that - is a massage. How deliciously sensual.
Damn!
That is the type of massage I would love!
2nd person point of view
I would have tried to read your tale, and likely have finished it, if you hadn't used the 2nd person POV format.
As a male, I cannot get into stories where the author has written to me as a female. As a matter of fact, I rarely bother to read any 2nd person POV stories.
I am bewildered as to why people write in this vein.
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