A Real Love

Very good

Was disappointed when I hit a cliff hanger. Please continue.

I want a continuation but then I don't. Sometimes these tales don't need a HEA. They both missed out on what could have been. I believe I'm OK with how this ended.

Great Beginning

Well Written, but really does need to be continued for at least one more chapter. Will she think about her situation and move on or will she show up at his door after the divorce is finalized wanting to give them a chance to be something more that friends? What will Carl do? Will he show up at her mother's house trying to force her to come back?

Looking forward to another entry. Same Bat-time, Same Bat-channel.

Good start but...

...you have a lot of unfinished stories on your profile already. I'm reluctant to get into this one knowing I may never see the end of it.

Please Continue

Please Continue! Please Continue! Please Continue! I know you have other stories that need to be finished as well, but I really like this story.

Looking good

An interesting beginning that could head off in a number of directions so yes, please continue.

Don't make me have to cheer for France tomorrow!

To Everyone

Guys and girls,

This is not a one-off story, it is a series and I am very determined to continue to write it. Chapter has been uploaded, and is awaiting publication. Chapter three is almost finished, and I will submit very soon.

Glad everyone likes this series, one of my best so far.

Scotjock1

So, you're actually going to finish this one? I think I will wait and see before starting another of yours.

Good Start

I like how this story has started, and hope you continue it to the end. It would be great to read the complete book. Please continue!

Wonderful story!!

Please continue. I love the characters and the story.

MORE PLEASE! I'm already in LOVE with these two.

Great story

So real and believable. Many friends have been in similar situations. It is better to take a chance and admit true feelings than regret it for a long, long time

WHAT STOP NOW??

What Stop NOW?? It is a great story. Let him run after the train and get in the nearly end luggage compartment. Get off aT Watford and get in her carriage.
Make her get off at Milton Keynes and find no return to London trains till early morning. Cuddle up on the bench in the waiting room and you know… CONTINUE.