Dave and Leroy Ch. 02

I'd love to see you get an editor. There are basic errors that even a spell check would help. The story itself is good and it is sad at the same time. It is so sad that people can be so close-minded. To think that her son in the military. She should be glad her son came home unlike many others and she won't see him b/c he is gay. The woman should be ashamed to call herself a mom. And the father should be ashamed to not stand up to her and say he won't have his kid cut from his life. But, that is my opinion. Keep writing. I love that the rest of the family is supportive and love the little grandkid that told grandma she was wrong!!

Four stars.

This chapter was better than the last one. I liked it. I hated his parents. His mom should be ashamed to call herself a mother, and the father is the worst coward ever. He needs to man up and stand up to that bitch.

very nice!!!

Excellent story and very well scripted, errors did NOT diminish the beauty and gravity of what this story was trying to portray! Love will always trump bigotry and cowardice!!

Thank you

Sorry about the errors I noticed them after, the chapters were posted. Yes I do need an editor and I will look for one for the next story or next chapter (I just like sharing my story), I have the 3rd chapter on waiting to be posted by the site. So hopefully I caught the few that I saw in Chapter 3. I hate catching errors, I thought I had them all in the first and second chapters but once they came up live I caught more. :(.

Hopefully the father in my next chapter redeems himself (more in chapter 4), I have more of this story already pre-written but they is still a lot that is in my head.

I have two plus other stories I am writing right now, so I will find an editor for them.

Thank you for your commits, I do appreciate them

Really

Ok no one stood up to their mom or wife. Really stupid

Still no emotion whatsoever.