Jane's Diary - Valentine's Day

Loved it!!

What a fabulous, sexy story! Really loved it, especially when you were both riding their cocks at the same time. More stories from you please Jane!

cool

i loved it but the only thing is that its pretty short. By the way valentines day is on the 14th of February NOT the 15th! I really liked it, please write more stories like this just make them a bit longer.

sorry

It's a diary entry, and she wrote it on the next day, that;s why it's written Feb 15, but the night of fun was the night before on Feb 14th, Sorry I didn't make that clear! :( I'm sorry

Thanks

Thank you anon- that means so much! I'm very new to publishing what I write, I've written for fun always, but not dirty stuff, so I'm new to writing on the subject and I'm a bit of a vanilla. When I read stories to play, it doesn't take me long to finish, so I'll try to make them longer! Thanks

pretty darn good

I scored it a 4 and would have liked it to be a little longer chapter. I hope you have another chapter planned.

enjoyed it.

hope you'll do a longer piece, add some drama and tension and 'real life' flow that a diary entry leaves stilted. great first effort, i look forward to more.

Great!

Loved your first story! I enjoy reading group sex or threesome stories with FFM. Keep writing more, perhaps a longer one, as the other comments have suggested. Looking forward to reading more from you!

absolutely a hot story!!!