remarkable story
i love the way the Author writes with such Soft Power & intensity.
several times i totaly lost / forgot the familial aspect of the story
exceedingly well written ,
intriguing plot
interesting protagonists
engaging & entertaining to read.
This story keeps getting better and better. It is great. I think Michael should get his vasectomy reversed after the sister and niece change their minds about wanting Michael to get them both pregnant. The daughter should get her own tat just like her Mother's egg.
i may be old fashioned but the continuous use of cunt was old by the first use
there are much better words like pussy which are more desirable and less derogatory. cunt should be reserved for things like the grandmother. otherwise this has been a good story so far and I look forward to more chapters
If you wanted a gelding you should have wrote his nuts out of the story altogether.
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Anonymous07/24/15
Cunt
I agree with a previous commentor. You wore cunt out when you didn't refer to granny immediately. Cunt is so negative and so insulting. More than part of a woman's anatomy, it refers to her demeanor, attitude, way she treats others, personality, things like that and never in a good way. My wife was much littler than me, but the 'C' word was the one thing I could do to get myself a good beating. I let it fly once, knowing what would come, and got the flared end of an old fashioned straw broom over my head and shoulders many times before I could get out the door. I didn't do that again. He needs also to keep his little swimmers to himself. His sister is becoming successful after much adversity and another baby would complicate her life in ways she doesn't need. He needs to avoid pregnancy for 'Niecy' too. She has her whold life ahead of her and she's barely begun.
English
nice but sad
Cinda sad that they won't have any babies but love the story except that.
nice but
Still hoping for some girl-girl seduction. If not Meghan and Denise, another woman at least.
ditto to Jedd11
I agree with Jedd11
Hmm
I don't get it...
exquisite
remarkable story
i love the way the Author writes with such Soft Power & intensity.
several times i totaly lost / forgot the familial aspect of the story
exceedingly well written ,
intriguing plot
interesting protagonists
engaging & entertaining to read.
sublime.
looking forward to reading the next chapters.
Great
This story keeps getting better and better. It is great. I think Michael should get his vasectomy reversed after the sister and niece change their minds about wanting Michael to get them both pregnant. The daughter should get her own tat just like her Mother's egg.
i may be old fashioned but the continuous use of cunt was old by the first use
there are much better words like pussy which are more desirable and less derogatory. cunt should be reserved for things like the grandmother. otherwise this has been a good story so far and I look forward to more chapters
Call me old fashioned if you want
If you wanted a gelding you should have wrote his nuts out of the story altogether.
Cunt
I agree with a previous commentor. You wore cunt out when you didn't refer to granny immediately. Cunt is so negative and so insulting. More than part of a woman's anatomy, it refers to her demeanor, attitude, way she treats others, personality, things like that and never in a good way. My wife was much littler than me, but the 'C' word was the one thing I could do to get myself a good beating. I let it fly once, knowing what would come, and got the flared end of an old fashioned straw broom over my head and shoulders many times before I could get out the door. I didn't do that again. He needs also to keep his little swimmers to himself. His sister is becoming successful after much adversity and another baby would complicate her life in ways she doesn't need. He needs to avoid pregnancy for 'Niecy' too. She has her whold life ahead of her and she's barely begun.
GOOD JOB
Should have gotten a reversal on the clip job very good job otherwise.
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