On Our Honeymoon

Another stupid cuck story....

WACC hubbby... How original. Are these stories turned out by monkeys typing on a computer keyboard?

please

Stop all these cuck stories. A normal sane man cannot possibly dream about this?
And I am fed up with this kind of stories. A minority of writers who love this sick ideas are filling this category on lit. Awful!!!

Touching

I found it touching that this newly married couple stumbled into a life style that transformed itself into an agreement that sparks their relationship.
What I do not understand is why people who dislike this type of story bother to read it, and then waste their time writing about their repugnance. Why not read a story that turns you on instead of one that makes you upset? Who is more sane, the author who shares a story that turns him on (which seems to turn on an increasing percentage of the population) or the disgruntled reader who already knows this story is a turn off but reads it anyway?

Author is really "dumbandstupid"

And previous commenter is as sick as the idiots posting this.

Great story, please continue.

Marco gave his Wife what she truly deserved. he learned his true nature and both are happy.

put this in IR not LW and stories of the mentally ill arent erotic

sorry you need mental help and she needs to go join a legal brothel

Good quick read

Loved it.

Sick story by a sick author

For those who think this story is cool, your as sick as the author.

@Anonymous Re: "Touching"

We complain because we are not told up front that it is a cuck story!

True, this one HINTS at it in the description, but we have to at least start to read it to discover that he's going to accept another man taking his new bride before him!

All you cuck writers have to do is put "WACC" in the description line and we'll know to avoid it, and I, at least, will leave you alone.

Steve and Sue

Equals Dumb and Dumber.Simple Not a brain cell between them.Good luck Steve.

1 Star!

Another sick/cuck/gay story in the wrong category. This site is on its last leg!

Stupid or what?

Why would any newly-weds want this on their honeymoon? No worries about pregnancy or STD's either.

I agree with Karen E

Please warn us its just another willing cuckold story. Loving wives has turned into a sad category. Thanks to the comments I was able to avoid it. Where is the erotica? (ML)

Anonymous food for thought.....

This is for the anonymous commenter who called the author sick.....Before you judge the author, please remember that you're viewing erotic literature and when you call someone sick, you need to look in the mirror and judge that person as well.

well maybe you'll get tired of reading LW stories and leave forever but

then I'm sure Isis is a good will org, Maybe you should give up and eat shit and die dear annony!! I have it a 5

A simple disclaimer...

and the vast majority of complaints and flames would go away. Frankly i think that most cuck writers like getting in the face of the rest of us (99.9% ?) on the planet. It's discourteous and it only increases our disdain for your sickness.

Yes I know literotica is about erotica, and in the case of far too many - porn, but this isn't erotica as much as it's flaunting a major mental/personality disorder and cuck stories have overrun loving wives and now overflowing into other hubs.

If cuck writers would do as KarenE suggests literotica might become enjoyable again. Now I just want to take a shower or jump in an autoclave after slogging through purple prose only to find cuckie at the end.

I eschew the rating system but seem to take pleasure in 1* voting every story from an author who uses this deception. Maybe it will spare a few eyeballs.

A simple observation.....

To all those who were complaining about not realizing it was a cuck story, did you not read the story descriptions? It seemed pretty obvious, at least to me, what the story was about. What you might wish to complain about is story structure or character development. Although I don't have any issues with those topics, those would be good topics of discussion. It was however, a flash story, so the author can be excused for not creating complex characters or a deep plot.

CUCKOLD WANT-A-BE

Sounds like great life style for Steve get to eat lots of great BLACK CREAMPIE YUM YUM YUM

re: A simple observation.....

go back in the bedroom, ask the man that's fucking your wife to step aside so you can lick the cum out of her pussy. You'll feel better, you spineless WACC.

One last thing...

Authors should really disable the ability for anonymous posters to comment. They add nothing to the discussion.

re: A simple disclaimer...

A disclaimer that is given AFTER opening a story is worthless. Now, if this site would expand the terse one line synopsis, including codes and tags, you might have a case, but otherwise this is superficial nonsense.

And LW continues down the "Idiot" drain

What was original, clever or interesting about this sad story? You find it erotic that your wife is a whore? How will you explain a black baby to you friends and family? Just plain dumb. And to Con - Anon DO further the discussion. ANd I think the discussion is that there needs to be a new category for this cuck crap.

Cuckoldry is a FETISH but cucks won't post this stuff in the correct section because there are not enough people in there to fuel their masochistic desires.

re:And LW continues down the "Idiot" drain

For the most part, Anon comments add nothing to the discussion. Most of the posts are merely insults directed towards the author and their efforts.

Here's an idea for the Anon commenters......

Stop bitching and write your own stories. Then post them on this website and then we can make fun of your efforts.

@Concritic123

Yes, in THIS case it was fairly obvious, although without knowing his reaction we can't be SURE it's a WACC - maybe he's gonna go all BTB on her!

Concritic123

You hypocrite.Do you realize that you have commented 3 or 4 times on this story but never once said what YOU thought of it Why don't you comment on the story and let the other people comment on what they want.Are you the comment police?No need to comment on this story It was that bad.

@Concritic Write our own?

Interesting idea. Let's check yours, shall we? Oopsie no stories. Guess you're just like the rest of the reading public who are the author's ultimate customers. We are entitled to express opinions and authors, if they want to build and audience, would do well to pay attention.

Re: Concritic123

Dude we are all anons on here. Do you go by Concritic in real life?

LMAO

Thanks anons for the comments. I can avoid reading trash like bonnietaylor2 favors. Again she's here posting anonymously giving shit stories her usual 5 stars. Meaningless and worthless scoring and of course hated comments. Get anybody hard lately and watch them come for you? Would have thought that would mellow you some. Isn't this fun? It's a pleasure to give this a 1* rating. Enjoy bonnie.

Sickening stuff!

Wimp, dweeb, spineless, etc.

Thanks for sharing! Only one thing better, for Marco to impregnate your wife Sue

can i say

what a crock of shit story. and this is not a loving wife story can we say cuck instead.

They should....

Have a wimps and sluts section. 1*. Wish I could give less.

A DOUBLE CUCK WITH A WIMPY FETISH

yet, the beat continued. TK U MLJ LV NV

Yum

Maybe I'm biased. I've had four married men ask me to fuck their wives. Two just wanted to watch, one wanted his wife to blow him while I fucked her, and one sucked my dick to get it hard and then guided it in his wife's pussy. Then he ate my load out of her and sucked my dick clean of his wife's pussy juice. I have no idea what their marriages are all about and that does't even concern me. As long as everybody consents and has a good time, that's all I care about.

Sounds to me like the guy married the wrong gender. he should have married a guy so he could suck dick and get fucked in the asshole all of the time

Do you really think this is erotic or exciting literature?

Just one more sick fuck, writing for a few other sick fucks. Glad you have an outlet that is this harmless, at least to others. Hope you get well some day.

My views...

I personally like the BTB themed stories. However, using the logic displayed by some Anons, it wouldn't fall in the Loving Wives folder either. I believe in the sanctity of marriage. One affair is a divorcing offence, but that's just me. I like the way an author can spin a story. Some stories are good and some aren't. What I won't do is verbally attempt to denigrate someone's efforts to create a work of fiction. Con critic is short for Constructive Criticism. Everyone can use some from time to time.

sorry -

Wow...I never expected such a negative response to what I wrote. Its an intimate secret my wife and I have shared for over 10 years, and since I cant talk to family or friends about it, I thought it would be interesting to see what others thought about our once-a-year arrangement. I am sorry if I wrote it in the wrong section - for what its worth I feel I have a VERY loving wife, so thats the category I felt was ok. I have no idea what WCCC means, sorry. We have two children (both mine) - we did not have to worry about a black baby. She is on the pill and that was never an issue. One of our anniversaries was when she was 8 months pregnant - we always joke about how her lover probably induced things since she gave birth the day after he was with her..lol
I won't write anything else here - but for me, it was just a chance to share my view on how something that can seem wrong in a moral sense, does not have to be such a bad thing for everyone. It works for us.
God bless and take care -

Steve, write more stories! The site is infested with Born Again Christian trolls

who leave fake negative comments on stories like yours.

So ignore the knuckle-dragging trolls.

Why 2*?

Whyb 2*? not because another man had his wife in the honeymoon (that was their choice), but because one thing: Had he, before the wedding, had sex with his wife? If yes, the honeymoon sex wasn't so important!! If they hadn't how did he know: "My wife's nipples are VERY sensitive"? Detaild are important in this short stories...And why in hell would he invite a waiter from the boat to their hotel?

Impo he invited a waiter from the boat to fuck her hot ass.

Loved it 5*

@SteveandSue, you seriously didn't expect comments like what you got? Have you not read any other LW stories? If you had you should have expected it.

re: anonymous-Steve write more stories......

What's a fake negative comment??????????????????

I hate to tell you this author.......

I haven't read your story, since I find willing cuckoldry non-erotic, but I do read the comments on each new author. Your story must have been a dud, hence all the negative comments, but if it's any consolation, your writing did create a fun read in the public feedback section. Always get a bang out of the cucks vs. the anon battles. I have to admit that most of these stories really should be in the "fetish" category. I know many disagree, but to me the desire to watch your wife being fucked by another is not a normal behavior as so many on this site seem to think.

chuck tale

you are a chuck and this is not a LV tale

re: Concritic123

Stop your whining. You made numerous comments about others, but said nothing about the story. Checked your bio, talk about being anonymous, all we know about you is that you're over 18. That's it. Nothing else. Oh, checked how many stories you wrote, and again Zilch, Nada, Nothing. Other than your fake username, you haven't contributed nothing, but whiny comments.
Actually, Concritic123 the anons are doing this author a favor. They're telling him this type of story is not appreciated by the majority of readers in loving wives, regardless what the willing cuckold lovers say. Notice, the overall low scores on all stories of this type. Doesn't that tell you something. Maybe some day this site will create a category for the cuckolds. Hope it's soon.

Some people only read the COMMENTS because...

sometimes they are more interesting than the story.

I had avoided this story ALL day. Personally, I really get bothered by the "my wife fucks another guy on the honeymoon" type stories. They are ALWAYS about humilliation. Possibly understated, but this one IS NO DIFFERENT.

Hey, I have a cast iron stomach, so sure, every once and while I read something distatesful. It is curiousity at first, but not how you think. Curious if an author can handle the subject well, can they explain their justifications, do they write competently enough to illustrate both emotions and experience?? Once I told Swingerjoe, that the reason I read cheating stories is that I like to hear the flawed arguments made, and compose rebutall scenarios in my mind. The best stories in this genre, have intelligent character writing, and couragous dialogue. If I sit at my computer composing "what would I have said or done to fix this problem instead" then the author has done their job. Then the author has made this reader think. But sadly, way too many people think all a story needs is some fucking in it. Hey my wife is a slut and it turns me on, how about you?

Ugh NOO! Your wife IS a slut, and it SHOULDN'T turn you on, and the fact that it does isn't normal. And what you are really seeking out is validation that you aren't the only crazy damaged people out there.

Well, I suppose you aren't. But I caution you on the company you seek to keep.

So anyway, what made me read this, and then comment?

The author responding in his own comments. Deciding to give up?
Hey, just write a better story, and may be put it in a better (more appropriate) category.

!) Cuckolding is a fetish. But it also concerns marriage. If your story is more about the marriage than it is about the cucking then LW. If the cuck fetish is the ONLY theme, then fetish.
2) Creampies, and bi-sex acts are fetish as well. If the main theme is how much you love slurping another man's jizz outta wifey, then consider fetish. If it is described as a one time act, and the majority of the story follows a much longer, more convaluted plot, then may be not.
3) If your wife exclusively has black lovers, then you really need to consider Inter-Racial. Lets go back to your story. If we NEVER knew that Marco was black, (hey- he could be Itallian, or Spanish, or frankly even Bronx Jew), would the story be the same or different? The fact that every anniversary she picks a black lover seems to be a point of pride for the narrator. The shock value of contrasting skin color is a major point made. I really think you should have classified this story THERE- in IR. But again, you could have mentioned ALL of her lovers and never once mentioned skin color. EVEN in describing the married couple. Using race in a story is a choice. And when you make the choice to use black on white, you need to be prepared for the bigoted fallout from the general readership. That is exactly why a category like IR exists.
4)WACC definition: Wimp Assed Castrated Cuckold OR (probably what was originally intended) Willing and Consenting Cuckold
5)KarenE has a great point about labels and warnings. Often a story WILL do better in avoiding the LARGE quantity of negative response when story tags are used effectively, and when titles and tag lines are cleverly informative. Barring that, a few words of warning/explanation at the start,acting as a preface, will even help the people who ignore story tags, and opened your story anyway. I myself have commented on a story I didn't read, and KNEW I wouldn't like, (which BTW means I didn't vote) with a sincere THANKYOU for the warning. I wish more authors did this, and I like to support EVERY author that does.
6) I hope you don't honestly believe that ALL anons are the same. Some are bad, some are good. Read every comment, and you can decide for yourself. Censoring anoymous comments prohibits those who just MIGHT have something positive to say from saying anything. It is the same with "named" commenters. Just having a member ID doesn't prevent the negative responses and insulting idiocy from polluting the comments section. Hell, some of those guys are even worse than the anons! I always tell any author struggling with anon comments, to remember that they don't want to limit ANY of their potential audience for a story. Anons DO vote. Why piss them off, before you have even given eachother a chance? That said, if the majority of your response IS negative, then there, THAT has told you something too. There are stories here that do feature extra-marital sex that do very well, and have a majority of positve responses. What was it about your story that bothered so many?

Well, I only speak for myself. But here is my guess:
You don't spend anytime telling us what was good about your marriage. OK, you set some rules (only once a year). You think it is funny to use the anniversary for this purpose. That would make most any reader cringe, in and of itself. You go out of your way to show how hubby has been marginalized, and humilliated. You never SHOW (and that is important....There is a need to SHOW and NOT just TELL when it comes to characterizations and development), you never show the flip-side when it IS truly loving between them. You tell a story about her getting fucked by someone else, and all hubby gets is spermy leftovers. I mean really? Does this sound like love? Does this sound like a strong marriage? Doesn't it sound the least little bit unhealty? Oh well, you say, the other 364 days of the year it is not like that! OK, I say, but then why the hell didn't you tell us about any one of THEM then? How are we supposed to believe that this woman isn't just anoither BBC whore, using and abusing her wimp hubby, dreaming of the next BBC experience? Why did she even marry him? What keeps them together? How DOES she show her love when she isn't busy humilliating him and disrespecting him and their marriage? I won't pretend to understand it. But see author, the problem with this story is that you made ZERO attempt to try and make me see the why. Why would he put up with this? Why does it work? Is it just because he likes the taste of black cum and a stretched out pussy? Come on, there HAS to be more to it than that, right?
But apparently no, not acccording to your story. It is as simple as a guy who fits that first defination of WACC. And if that ISN"T true, then you didn't do a good enough job of proving otherwise. And THAT.....
THAT is why this story failed.

But NO ONE (of any value anyway) said to stop trying. Just do better next time. Classify it better. Work on your characters. Tell the rest of the story. And if you want this to be a LW, for every round of hot sex wifey has with a lover that you describe, sex with hubby should get TWICE as much description. If not, all you have is erotic couplings. A story that ONLY describes the sex and nothing else, belongs there. But mind, there you really have to be good at describing sex acts, or they won't vote any more favorably.
Don't quit, but just work harder. And paint on a slightly thicker skin, while leaving color barriers out of it.
Good Luck!
(no vote)

Anon comments are worthless

Ignore them on this story, turn them off on any future ones. No one who doesn't want a screen name to be attached to their thoughts or wants people to be able to respond to them or call them out on their shit has anything worth while to contribute to this site. If Laurel were concerned with anything but drumming up page views than she'd ban them from commenting or voting m