Thirteen

The syntax of the first lines threw me a bit, but then when I thought about it more (which is what a poem is supposed to do), they made sense, particularly with the allusion to religion.

I like the way you used language here. On the one hand "ain't" suggests a certain image of the narrator. "Penis" does too instead of "cock" or "prick." It reinforces the innocence of the 13 year old. I also thought not referring specifically to the gender of the victim amplified the poem.

Although disturbing, this was well written and thought provoking.

IS THIS A COMPLAINT OR A REPORT

next payday get a bunch of 6s about 3 should suffice. TK U MLJ LV NV

Well done. Great juxtaposition of ideas.