Erotic and sexual but not... Well played Vincey! I'd like to see where this goes! Thanks for a great read
Keep going ! Please, write 3 pages next time ! This story is very exciting !
I really like how this story progressed quickly and with good detail for the most part. A few errors here and there, but everyone does on this site. Looking forward to another chapter!
Dude when is part 2 coming out?
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Great story!
Erotic and sexual but not... Well played Vincey! I'd like to see where this goes! Thanks for a great read
Great !
Keep going ! Please, write 3 pages next time ! This story is very exciting !
Nice start
I really like how this story progressed quickly and with good detail for the most part. A few errors here and there, but everyone does on this site. Looking forward to another chapter!
When is part 2?
Dude when is part 2 coming out?
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