Charlie & Miley Ch. 06

Nothing but Amazing

I am sad to see this story end but oh damn was it good. Got me to laugh, feel, and fap. The sex scenes and dirty talk are amazing, the actually characters are great, and the writing even better. Mr. Frozenhero1, this story ranks above all others.

Now that was perfect!!!!;

Congratulations on a well done series. This ending was poetically perfect.
The lactation fetish was the pinnacle!! The icing on the cake!
Outstanding job FH1, way to stay true to your characters!
Top notch!!!!!!!!!!

Maz

Amazing

This was one of the best stories I have ever read. Your characters were memorable and I enjoyed every chapter. It is sad to see the end but it was very enjoyable getting there. Thank you for writing this masterpiece.

Bang

You sure ended the story with a bang by the flashing thing of Miley's past adventures. Awesome. MAYBE there's another idea in your mind for a great story like this????? Hm.... maybe maybe it's hiding in a corner or something? FIND IT.

Perfect

Perfect ending to a great story.

I'm really gonna miss this gang. Thank you for giving us such memorable series.

It's been a great ride!

I have followed this story from the beginning. This has been the most enjoyable story ever on this site. The conclusion was done nicely. Thanks for bringing us on the ride with Charlie and Miley.

Wow

It's been an amazing journey. Secretly glad the boys are writing for Marvel although DC could be fun. Hahahaha it an Erotic Story site and I bet half your fans could be closet comic book geeks

THIS HAS SEVERAL EXITS FOR THE STORY

but as in every marriage there are snags. TK U MLJ LV NV

good work

Great story man sad to see it finish.....but since Charlie's and mileys story is finish I think its time to start up savannah again......who's with me

Thanks

Thanks for this epic series, kudos to you to conclude this long running tale. Good job.

sad

Sad to see it go. I loved this series. Maybe there is a Gwen story down the road?

happy and sad

I loved beauty and the geek since the first story and have loved watching the progression of Charlie and Mileys love and I think u ended the story perfectly so for that I am happy and grateful for all the brilliant chapters though I am sad to see them go they were a big part of my life - waiting (sometimes impatiently) for the next chapter I know I shall enjoy re reading the story and I hope u continue to write such true to life stories as this one

The end of an era

It's sad to see Charlie and Miley's story end but I couldn't have asked for anything better. Charlie and Miley are happy with their baby. Stacy and Brian are FINALLY married. I like how there's closure and that they got what they deserve. Thank you for giving this story as a gift to the world and this will go down in the Literotica history books as one of the best. I look forward to reading the journeys of the characters in your other stories.

Your loyal fan,

bignsassy818

Gonna be honest

This ending is sweet, but it feels mostly like the author just wanted to be done with it. If this was how it was going to end, the series didn't need a second story. I feel a bit let down that the storyline of "Charlie & Miley" didn't get it's ending, but rather just stopped, and then got a much broader series ending.

Perhaps most will disagree with me, but if this was going to be the end, it should have been the end of the first series, and that should have been that.

I agree

This whole second series doesn't seem to have gone anywhere.

Good Story

Have enjoyed this series since Beauty And The Geek started it all. Have enjoyed all the stories but this second set has been lacking the story line the first set had. Still all in all it has been great. Really hate to see it go. Have really enjoyed Miley and Charley and their escapades. Thanks for a good saga!

Well...

Like just about everyone else, Beauty and the Geek hooked me. This second series, seemed jumbled and looking for direction, however, but then it just seemed like you decided "fuck it, it's over!" Looking forward to future writings, but this one probably deserved a better send-off.

Wonderful characters

I love the series, loved the people in them. Something about their all out love was just fantastic, not just the sex! I like your new series, but while I recognize your style, I haven't fallen in love the characters the same way. Could be because it just hasn't gotten going yet, or also since you seem to be following different characters' stories. In any case I look forward to the new stuff!!

Just great

I really liked the first chapters as it was really satisfying and a great pleasure to read,however it's sad it ended but I knew it can't go far.The ending was in my opinion really good.Furthermore more in my opinion I would say this story is by far one of the best and spectacular story I've ever read ( on literotica) I also hope to see new stories being made this year or any.

Just a wonderful story from beginning to end.

I am so disappointed to have finished reading every chapter of this two part series. I loved every page and every twist and turn. It was one of very few series I couldn't stop reading, I devoured every word, wanting to find out what happened next, now that I've finished I face the task of finding another story on here that can live up to this one.
The only thing I think you left out was any detail of who Sam ended up marrying?
Otherwise, just a big thank-you for a really great story !

i love this seris

I just wish you made the ending longer seemed half hearted idk i hate seeing it end i lovelovelovelove this story

Well, contrary to other people's opinions on this story, I don't feel this was a half-hearted attempt at an ending. Not everything may have been perfect and not every ongoing story-line may have been resolved, but I enjoyed this closure. Not every story needs a "and they all lived happily ever after"-type epilogue, but it doesn't hurt when it is well written.

If anything, this last chapter feels a little bit too much like a fix-it-all. We got to see their cute daughter in several scenes, we got to see a conclusion to Brian's woes of love, we got to see a glimpse into their latest business avenues, we got to read about Miley's father and his relationship challenges and I'm sure there is more I just didn't catch properly.

There are two things I would've done differently if this was my story. First, I would have toned down the sexual parts a little bit, because your Miley/Charlie interactions were too frequent to stay innovative and hot. Then again, I can hardly complain about that, when the story has been posted on a site called literotica, that would be hypocritical of me. Second, Miley's personality made this story so successful, but her behavior and thinking process is without a doubt totally off-the-wall. I would've written more scenes containing observation and analyzation of a third party concerning her actions, because Miley often acted like no other rational person ever would ... and that only got mentioned in one single chapter when she's filled to the brim with pregnancy hormones?

Anyway, thanks for writing this story for our enjoyment, I appreciate your effort!

a sweet ending

everything tied up neatly,the characters endings made a great deal of sense...i feel compelled to point out that this chapter could have been a bit longer being the end and all,but otherwise i am glad about how this turned out

Don't Want to stop.

From beginning to end. Loved the story and the characters. Sad to see it end. A GREAT read.
THANKS

Sad that its over.

I don't usually comment, but I'de just like to say that this is easily the best completed story on this entire website. I really cared about the characters, glad to see they got a happy ending, other than Chip, poor guy. I'm sad that it's over, and just wanted to thank you for writing it in the first place.

Hey man, I just wanted you to know that this is the absolute best series I've ever read on literotica. You're ability to actually create characters that readers fall in love with is amazing! And of course the sex scenes have been steamy and hot! I'm sad to see the end of Charlie and Miley...and of course the rest of the crew. Nonetheless I still look forward to reading the rest of your work. On a side note, every one of your fans read MORE THAN 30 CHAPTERS just to continue following good ol' Charlie and Miley. If thats not a compliment about your amazing writing skills then I don't know what is!

If you take any suggestions as to what to write about next, I'd love to get to know more about Brian and Stacy's relationship.

wow

After 35 chapters of two high school seethearts i think i can say that i am satisfied (in more ways than one). I love your descriptiveness and the imagery it provides. Like my fellow commenters, i would love to see how stacy and brian continue.
One thing that kinda bothered me was the short chapters. If you had just made them into 8 longer (12 pages or so each) chapters that wouldve been nicer than going back to your submissions and reloading a fresh story.
If the story reflects how you are then i think we share a few fetishes......hehe.....
Overall it was a very cohesive story and loved the realistic ending!

Just amazing.

I was blown away by this series. I think I read the entire thing over three days off and on. Just.. wow. I hope you have other published for profit work. Wish you could list it here.

Epilogue

great story. loved it, but the epilogue fell flat with being so short and not really looking ahead for the group of friends. i found the last sentences funny, but what about more kid(s) for charlie and miley or stacey and brian? if this is it, it kind of fell flat for me.

All Good Things Come To An End

am going to really miss these characters ,

xxxhugsxxx

I AM GOING TO MISS THEM ALL

i am proud to say that i am one of the lucky readers of this great story, charlie and miley made a great impact for me as a reader. There may mever be a story in literotica as good as this one. MY FAVORITE STORY ..

Thank you frozenhero1 for creating this grear story, please make more stories in the future.

-N

Amazing

I'm so amazed by this entire series. I love every single bit of it. Its funny how it sorta reflects my relationship with my wife. Thanks for writing such an amazing piece of awesome! :) You've made my life a lot better knowing that I'm not the only one that has their dreams furfilled.

Love everything about the entire story

From Beauty and the geek to Charlie and Miley, this story has been amazing. Loved it very much :)

Loved It!!!!!

Both series are amazing. Just the right amount of everything, from the drama to the sex. These stories would make a great book, I would buy it. Wonderful work! I look forward to reading more. I've bookmarked your profile, you're definitely a favorite.

man?!

speechless!!
loved every single part of it!
amazing..

hats off, really

Finished with a smile.

What more can I ask for? I'll just recylcle my finishing comments for Beauty & Geek as they apply equally to Charlie & Miley.
Thanks a ton for the entertaining read, I'm off to see what else you've shared!
J

PeachKnight

... Said it all in the first comment. I, too, am so sorry to see this saga come to a close. I reread this series every now and then just because it's so enjoyable. Thank you so much.

VisualPerv

PS - I know you said you're done with "We're Screwed", but come on... :-)

Better late than never

I'm referring to my comment not your chapter by the way. I want to thank you for a truly memorable ride. I guess what I liked most about your work is that your characters aren't perfect and don't pretend to be. Just like in real life.

I hope at some point you will decide to revisit Charlie and Miley's world. Maybe a short story or two revolving around some of the other characters.

Whatever you decide just don't stop writing. And again thank you.

Wow just wow.

I stumbled on to this last night and in a matter of about 7 hours read every part of it. i was so enthralled with the characters and details it was so real my mind was doing back flips reading it. Great Job!

It would be fantastic if you would revisit the characters again.

Best series period

I stumbled across this back in 2011 when chapter 5 was on the new stories page and have been hooked since. All the ups and down drama and masterful storytelling have kept me company for four years. It's heartbreaking to see it end, but what a ride it has been and I thank you for sharing it

We do need

More of this series. It's just great!

Came for the smut stayed for the plot

That has got to be the largest amount of investment i've ever put into a literotica story, what a ride! All the twist, turns and deviations kept me hooked and not to mention Brian and Stacy's clusterfuck of a relationship even though I kinda wanted the Sam Brian relationship to work out. This was simply just more than smut, it's an unbreakable romance between two teens that happens to have an obscene amount of sex...

-Shardfrog

just GREAT !!!

i can't believe myself spent 2 days to read beauty & geeks and this one, absolutely great.

keep it up man.

Amazing

My boyfriend showed this to me. I have been stuck since. Will there be a series of Beauty and the geek?

Amazing

Couldn't help but keep reading

This seriously is one of my favorite series (and I've just read the first entry a few days ago). Though, I sort of got confused about everyone's ages. The plot is really good, it swayed my emotions every single chapter, and the smut is really erotic. Hope you add more stories like this one.

Great series

Hi just wanted to say this is a great series I just felt this last chapter seem rushed and not quite long enough.

Excellent story

It's taken me two days to read the entirety of beauty and the geek, reminds me of mine and my wife's relationship sometimes with all the geeky stuff :)
Thanks for this story and hope to read more from you

Amazing

This story was absolutely amazing, the whole thing! It actually reminds me of the man I intend to marry XD I loved it! You are absolutely wonderful at describing exactly what's happening and it makes readers feel as if the story were reality :)
Great job! :)