Nicely done! It was a fun story and I enjoyed the characterizations. This combined with the naughtiness in public factor made me hot! A couple of grammatical errors but practice makes perfect. :) Keeps me coming err..keeps them coming umm.. Keep up the good work! ;)
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Nicely done! It was a fun story and I enjoyed the characterizations. This combined with the naughtiness in public factor made me hot!
A couple of grammatical errors but practice makes perfect. :)
Keeps me coming err..keeps them coming umm.. Keep up the good work! ;)
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