This story is like one of those ultimate fantasies we all have but know the odds are nil it would ever happen. I really really liked it.
by
Anonymous02/17/15
Hopefully
the exposure of this contest will introduce more readers to one of our best writers!
by
Anonymous02/17/15
Well done
A fantastic and funny story.
by
Anonymous02/18/15
so fucking good
Good job Mr./Mrs Author
by
Anonymous02/18/15
Great story
Great V Day story. When I finished reading it, I was reminded of the story I had read when I was a kid about the hitchhiker being picked up by a bus load of girls! Fun read. Congratulations.
by
Anonymous02/19/15
Chuckles!
Sexiest most humorous story I've read in a while. Thank you, Mike
by
Anonymous02/19/15
Great
Another great story, I enjoy your work, keep writing whenever you can.
I haven't enjoyed a story like that in awhile. Great job.
by
Anonymous02/20/15
Now THAT is a tall tale.
You handled it well. It was fun and at the same time a commentary on how a lot of young dummies seem to treat women. When all that is needed on both sides is a little respect.
I really enjoyed this one. Just goes to show you a little wine, roses and caring will go a long way!
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Anonymous02/21/15
Enjoyed!
Really enjoyed the story! Very well written. Only one tiny edit....I know u didn't have time. "But your gay", should have been "you're". Sorry, its my biggest peeve. But I'm wet nonetheless 😀
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Anonymous02/25/15
We've found us a WINNER!
Every single piece was amazing! Exciting build up, can't wait for next Valentine X'D. 5 stars all the freakin' way.
One of the best stories I've read on this site, this was so good and I think you handled the misconceptions concerning gay people very well. You are one talented author and I thoroughly enjoy your stories. Great job!
And I do NOT believe you just tossed this off for a contest. I've read several of your other stories, and figured this one would be fun. I was right - you kept the suspense building right up to the end. Kudos for a great story, and I hope you get more out there soon. (-:
Very good story!
Just the right amount of romance, and a lot of sex in the end!
Very likable characters, too.
I'm glad they got him drunk, I see a grand future for the five of them!
That ratings here mean nothing.This story isn't even penthouse letter 'quality' masturbation fodder l, but neither is the handful of other stories I checked out from the author so at least consistency is there.
Tip for you, not every woman's every waking thought is about sex. Try writing a real story and not your sad mid life crisis fantasies.
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Anonymous04/24/15
Simply your opinion
To Asthecrowflies...,
Clearly you are entitled to your opinion, however, the rating from hundreds of readers and the dozens of positive comments is indicative of the quality of the story. Go troll somewhere else.
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Anonymous04/25/15
This is going to sound weird and arrogant, but....
....I had a situation so similar to this, it's almost frightening.
Lot's of difference in circumstances, head count, etc., but the bottom line is, I ended up in an off campus house with seven girls....and I made 8 for a full house.
To the goth girl that claims women don't think about sex all the time.....you're right....until faced with a challenge....then the challenge becomes almost all consuming.
In my case, I'm bi. And by the time the semester ended, I'd had everything done to me a girl can do. And I'd slept with every one of them....although no schedule came out of it. I stayed on another semester before changing schools to pursue my doctorate. Two if the seven ended up at my school. We shared my apartment for three of the four semesters I was there. And I asked one of them to marry me. She did and we have been happier than I believed two people could be. She sets the schedule for sex, I set the romance schedule (dates, dinners, dancing, walks in the park when the lilacs are in bloom, etc.). It works for us....and out kids (all three of them) seem happy and well adjusted.
as my own history goes... many girls withhold from those who pursue them and then whine when someone doesn't... if you continue then you might bring in another bad boy or a girl that tries to sabotage the garden...
Fun story. Would love to see a follow up where they all find out he was never actually gay.
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Anonymous10/22/15
Perfect
As a female, I think this is one of the best stories on this site. Well done 10/10!
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Anonymous10/30/15
Insanely
Good when you want to be.
by
Anonymous11/04/15
Deliciously Creative
Original, fresh, and fun
by
Anonymous11/23/15
Great story
Really well written and you had just the right mix of teasing and storytelling/background building before the eventual big event. The fact I read to the end even after I...finished, is testament to how gripping this story was! Just for future, it would have been nice for the eventual moment of penetration to have been more of a big deal. Great story though :) would love a sequel!
by
Anonymous12/06/15
Lovely
Your stories are always beautiful.
by
Anonymous12/15/15
Enchanting 💙
I really enjoyed the way you arranged the thoughts, it was the best story I've read so far! You are am amazing writter. Keep up the good work!!
Not just hot, but extremely well written. The payoff was worth it, but it never felt like the story was dragging along either. The characters felt real, and the emotional impact was felt right along with the sex. Bravo!!
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Anonymous03/10/16
woah
The second best story I've read on here, and I've read a lot. Very well written, and the erotica was amazing.
I loved the story, but can't help but be depressed by it....
I mean they're friends... Throwing around the word "love"... But he's only there for that semester and then he's what...? Gone...?
I mean, this is just the equivalent of summer loving, right...? Not as if they'll be together for life...
And if they ARE together for a long time, are they going to be upset when they learn he never WAS gay...? He never actually out and out said he WAS, just let them make the assumption... But he DID say things to substantiate the thought...
It would make a nice sequel of him hanging around, maybe getting a job locally while they're still in school... And one of them, likely Bruna or Ashley, broaching the question... Maybe while in bed with him one night...
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Anonymous05/31/16
Amazing
Very sexy, well written and the pacing was excellent. I was excited from the beginning to end. Thank You!
What a fantasy
This story is like one of those ultimate fantasies we all have but know the odds are nil it would ever happen. I really really liked it.
Hopefully
the exposure of this contest will introduce more readers to one of our best writers!
Well done
A fantastic and funny story.
so fucking good
Good job Mr./Mrs Author
Great story
Great V Day story. When I finished reading it, I was reminded of the story I had read when I was a kid about the hitchhiker being picked up by a bus load of girls! Fun read. Congratulations.
Chuckles!
Sexiest most humorous story I've read in a while. Thank you, Mike
Great
Another great story, I enjoy your work, keep writing whenever you can.
One of the best
I haven't enjoyed a story like that in awhile. Great job.
Now THAT is a tall tale.
You handled it well. It was fun and at the same time a commentary on how a lot of young dummies seem to treat women. When all that is needed on both sides is a little respect.
Great Story!
I really enjoyed this one. Just goes to show you a little wine, roses and caring will go a long way!
Enjoyed!
Really enjoyed the story! Very well written. Only one tiny edit....I know u didn't have time. "But your gay", should have been "you're". Sorry, its my biggest peeve. But I'm wet nonetheless 😀
We've found us a WINNER!
Every single piece was amazing! Exciting build up, can't wait for next Valentine X'D. 5 stars all the freakin' way.
Awesome as always
I REALLY hope you come back to this and let us know about what happens when Alex graduates
Fan-fucking-tastic!
great story man! love your works keep it up!
Delightful story
What a lucky guy, wish I had had an experience like that a few times, no, a lot of times. Sigh, and alas.
Adding my well done to the throng.
Sequel??
If it's possible can you write a sequel to this story please!!!!
it was such a great turn on i want to read more
also i wish i was this guy!!!!!!
Fantastic
Fantastic read. Really enjoyed it. Very well written and entertaining. Thank you.
I always love your stories
Have you posted this before, or on another site? I swear I've read it before.
I still loved it. GREAT story.
Best!!!
One of the best stories I've read on this site, this was so good and I think you handled the misconceptions concerning gay people very well. You are one talented author and I thoroughly enjoy your stories. Great job!
You're the Best, TTT!
I've loved all your stories, and this is one of the very best! Keep it up, TTT.
whoa! Number 1 of all the stories I've ever read, great job. When is the movie coming out.........?
Sequel?
Simply an amazing story. Would love to know what happens later on down the road.
Excellent story ...
And I do NOT believe you just tossed this off for a contest. I've read several of your other stories, and figured this one would be fun. I was right - you kept the suspense building right up to the end. Kudos for a great story, and I hope you get more out there soon. (-:
Nice!!!
Very good story!
Just the right amount of romance, and a lot of sex in the end!
Very likable characters, too.
I'm glad they got him drunk, I see a grand future for the five of them!
Brilliant
I felt a connection with the characters, their stories and their personalities.
The story built suspense perfectly and got where everyone wanted it to.
I hope you continue the story.
This story is proof
That ratings here mean nothing.This story isn't even penthouse letter 'quality' masturbation fodder l, but neither is the handful of other stories I checked out from the author so at least consistency is there.
Tip for you, not every woman's every waking thought is about sex. Try writing a real story and not your sad mid life crisis fantasies.
Simply your opinion
To Asthecrowflies...,
Clearly you are entitled to your opinion, however, the rating from hundreds of readers and the dozens of positive comments is indicative of the quality of the story. Go troll somewhere else.
This is going to sound weird and arrogant, but....
....I had a situation so similar to this, it's almost frightening.
Lot's of difference in circumstances, head count, etc., but the bottom line is, I ended up in an off campus house with seven girls....and I made 8 for a full house.
To the goth girl that claims women don't think about sex all the time.....you're right....until faced with a challenge....then the challenge becomes almost all consuming.
In my case, I'm bi. And by the time the semester ended, I'd had everything done to me a girl can do. And I'd slept with every one of them....although no schedule came out of it. I stayed on another semester before changing schools to pursue my doctorate. Two if the seven ended up at my school. We shared my apartment for three of the four semesters I was there. And I asked one of them to marry me. She did and we have been happier than I believed two people could be. She sets the schedule for sex, I set the romance schedule (dates, dinners, dancing, walks in the park when the lilacs are in bloom, etc.). It works for us....and out kids (all three of them) seem happy and well adjusted.
Keep on
I really hope you keep on writing this nice story... Nice building and a good track.
I had no complaints
as my own history goes... many girls withhold from those who pursue them and then whine when someone doesn't... if you continue then you might bring in another bad boy or a girl that tries to sabotage the garden...
Can you please
Can you please go back to the blackmail series
ANOTHER GOOD STORY
Well done.
As always
Another great tale.
Fun story. Would love to see a follow up where they all find out he was never actually gay.
Perfect
As a female, I think this is one of the best stories on this site. Well done 10/10!
Insanely
Good when you want to be.
Deliciously Creative
Original, fresh, and fun
Great story
Really well written and you had just the right mix of teasing and storytelling/background building before the eventual big event. The fact I read to the end even after I...finished, is testament to how gripping this story was! Just for future, it would have been nice for the eventual moment of penetration to have been more of a big deal. Great story though :) would love a sequel!
Lovely
Your stories are always beautiful.
Enchanting 💙
I really enjoyed the way you arranged the thoughts, it was the best story I've read so far! You are am amazing writter. Keep up the good work!!
Very enjoyable
Sth else :)
Nice one
Delicious way to get the gayness fucked out of you. I'd trade places with him any day
Outstanding Story!!!
Not just hot, but extremely well written. The payoff was worth it, but it never felt like the story was dragging along either. The characters felt real, and the emotional impact was felt right along with the sex. Bravo!!
woah
The second best story I've read on here, and I've read a lot. Very well written, and the erotica was amazing.
I'd kill for a full length story with Ashley and Meagan at least! 5 stars of course.
Loved it
loved this story...the sex was fun and hot..but the story
was even better..
bravo!
I don't care if it could really happen like that or not..
5 stars!
I loved the story, but can't help but be depressed by it....
I mean they're friends... Throwing around the word "love"... But he's only there for that semester and then he's what...? Gone...?
I mean, this is just the equivalent of summer loving, right...? Not as if they'll be together for life...
And if they ARE together for a long time, are they going to be upset when they learn he never WAS gay...? He never actually out and out said he WAS, just let them make the assumption... But he DID say things to substantiate the thought...
It would make a nice sequel of him hanging around, maybe getting a job locally while they're still in school... And one of them, likely Bruna or Ashley, broaching the question... Maybe while in bed with him one night...
Amazing
Very sexy, well written and the pacing was excellent. I was excited from the beginning to end. Thank You!
Second time's just as good
I realized I had read this already by the 3rd paragraph but decided it was worth another go.
Fantastic little tale, so well crafted and presented. An all time favorite!
asianToy
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