The Movie

Wrong category

Ugh.... really ????

ugh....really

You are a fucking moron

Are you retarded?

Your story included a character who was supposedly a lesbian, except she fucked a guy. Not a woman, but a guy. So, of course, it belongs in the Lesbian category, right? How can anyone be that fucking stupid!?

Oh, and aside from your inability to put your attempt at erotica in the right category, you also can't write a decent story. Terrible writing. You're the poster child for why Literotica should allow "0" votes. Or "negative" votes. Giving this garbage even ONE star is too generous!

Wrong category

just go away loser

Well...Duh Oh..Awkward!

Dude, WTF?

Yuck. Doodoo. Pooh. Trite. Crap. Damnit, the stench is fogging my flatscreen, I can't breath, help, I'm gasping, clutching my throat, my knees clench and I collapse upon my throbbing member, furiously sucking as my cock reaches out and clasps the back of my neck, slamming me down on it, forcing me to deep throat the pathetically small excuse for a cock that it so limply is. Erupting, shooting jizz to the back of my throat and I wish you would just Shut The Fuck Up! What evil forces are driving your need to write this piece of shit, this offensive dreck?

What is it about being gay that you don't get? This is just you wanking off to some straight dude's fantasy that is so far outa sync with the real world that it just shows you for a hapless loser who doesn't have a fucking clue.

I mean, like, really, right? What the fuck were you thinking?

This crap doesn't belong here. This is misogyny at it's most insidious. Maybe Dumpington would like this kind of crap, but really, this is lame, pathetic, offensive and just plain ignorant.

My frigging comment is hotter and more appropriately erotic than your story. You insult the alphabet, forcing it to be complicit in your crimes against the written word.

Erin

PS - Hey, Laurel! It oughta be possible to rate negative stars, right. Like at least lemme give him a minus 1?

Nope

Even if you had put this in the proper category, I wouldn't have liked it much...

Too busy laughing to barf

Lovely. Another "author" who views lesbians as misguided straight girls who don't know what they'e missing. All they need is a few minutes of funneling a big enough hog and they'll see the light, huh? And of course, who better to re-educate unsuspecting lesbians than the "author's" self-insert MC. All he has to do is whip out his Super-Amazing Magic Penis, and ZAMMO! One more ex-dyke.

Bitch, please.

As for constructive criticism...aww, screw that. It's wasted effort. Enjoy your one-star rating, pal. It's more than you deserve.

Poor effort

this movie bombed

This story has all the appeal of a jizz-streaked wad of shit baking on a hot sidewalk.

Garbage!!

Wrong category for one. Complete BS story for another. Any lesbians out there have sex with a guy just to see?!? if so let me know. Won't hold my breath waiting for an answer to that one.

Annoyed!!!

Take this crap OFF the LESBIAN story category and post it in the general idiot section where it should be!!!

My apologies.

Sorry to those I have offended with this story, I originally submitted it to another category entirely. I will be re-submitting shortly and hopefully it will be out of your hair soon. Sorry once more.

- Spike

:/

Crap story. I know I'm 100% gay and I wouldn't sleep with a guy just to make sure.

C.M

Yes wrong category

It was a story so does not have to be real, and it could happen. Life is not black and white, mostly if not all grey.

Crap

The story is terrible. The writing is awful, all of it. Seriously there's not one good thing I can say about any of this. On top of that it's definitely in the wrong category. Hope it's getting 1 bombed now.

worst story ever

this story shouldn't have been put in this category. I am a lesbian and I would never sleep with a guy just bc I want to try it .. this is one fucked up story but there are "lesbians" that do that . but we call them bisexuals. again worst story ive ever read in my life

Seriously.

Ok so I get the fact that there might be lesbians who would do this kind of thing but coming to this site reading these stories with my girlfriend and we are both like really what the hell. I had to double check to see if we chose the rigt catagories. Please make sure that next time you post it in the right catagory and not on the lesbian one cause if I WANTED TO READ ABOUT A GUY AND A GIRL I WOULD HAVE GO TO THAT CATAGORY. NOT BEING RUDE OR ANTHING BUT PLEASE NEXT TIME DON'T MAKE THE SAME MISTAKE.

The comments I read were enough for me
I would not dignify this story by reading it.