This gets pretty intense right from the start. This is usually a bad sign but you made it the start of something pretty special. Will there be a second chapter? There is room for one, but can you make it live up to the first part?
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This gets pretty intense right from the start. This is usually a bad sign but you made it the start of something pretty special.
Will there be a second chapter? There is room for one, but can you make it live up to the first part?
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