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Wilder Gods Ch. 02

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by Anonymous02/08/15

Constructive criticism

Two easily-confused words pop out: "ecstasy" and " shuddering". Otherwise, your solid writing skills are obvious.

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by L_Britz02/13/15

More!

Apart from a few errors, this proves a good read. My only frustration is that it's so short!! Your instalments are as teasing and frustrating as the princess's oral techniques ;) next time, satisfy your readers more and provide lots and lots of pages! :)

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