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Oh you rushed it
Slow down
Far too rushed, going by your intro I was expecting something longer, also the 'sharing' at the wedding was over the top and seemed too forced to be called anything close to romantic, also him gong off at his WEDDING to kiss the 18 year old while his wife was dancing with others doesn't scream romance either, did he really love his wife? He sure did move on to the 'niece' real quick.
I liked it!I
I still really liked it...keep 'em coming! Thanks!
Kind of confusing in the beginning. Were Carla and Beverly really close before the marriage? Carla had to have known that Beverly would develop feelings for Ken because he was the only guy treating her nice.
There are some unanswered questions with this story.
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