You KNOW how much I've been nagging you about a foursome, and you get the players together, 3 girls one guy, and you play it out as separate threesomes? I mean sure, depending on your definition being double-teamed while the third girl watches and/or plays with herself it could be called a foursome, but not in my book. Where's the scene where the ladies sit/stand next to eachother with him on the floor in the middle with one in his mouth and two in his hands? Where's the triple-teaming where he's being spitroasted only with an extra cock in his mouth or ass? Where's the triple simultaneous cumshot scene? Come on now, man!
Moving on from that though (hard as it may be...) I completely missed chapter 2 for some reason so I re-read the series from chapter 1, and I very much enjoyed it. I did kind of expect Terry from chapter 2 on the phone to be one of the girls here, though... Mistake, intentional set-up for a future chapter or completely unrelated to the plot?
I see some potential for an end-game story point in the 'Red' codeword from chapter 1 - just in case you forgot :). Basically something big happens, he says Red and walks away heartbroken, she fights to get him back and in doing so showing how much she cares for him. No idea what the 'something' would be though - hopefully not cheating but considering her job maybe that would be the easy route? Otherwise maybe just a conversation with a friend where she denies having any kind of real feelings for him out of embarrassment or whatever, he overhears and take it from there~.
5/5. Even without the foursome it's still a quality whiskey story.
I am glad you enjoyed the story though. I thought it would be sexy to kind of have his Mistress watching as he's ganged up on by her friends...rest assured though, you will get your foursome. I can't say if it will be in this story or another, as I have many other ideas for other stories, and it might be nice to add that to one of those. But it will happen.
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Anonymous02/10/15
It's every submissive, power bottom's fantasy.
All that and not even a blowjob for his "troubles." ;3 I know, not exactly "throwing him into the briar patch," but... If you're gonna throw the kid a bone for a job (or "jobs" ;3) well-done, at the very least, let him get his dick wet (especially after loaning him out to a very well-endowed, and eager/too horny friend). Passive ejaculation is good, active ejaculation is better--just my opinion.
another great chapter. Keep up the great writing. I love to see when you post the next chapter or start a new story . Hope to read more soon.
Big Fan
Killer12
by
Anonymous02/11/15
Amazing!
It's a shame you're planning on making this a short series, I think it's my favourite yet. The completely dominant/top shemales are great. Hope you're planning to have more shemale Dommes in the future!
...Story in Whiskey's extensive library, as for obvious reasons it has been my favorite and he has continually humored me in my various 'suggestions'. In any case, thanks Whiskey for writing such a fun distraction, and letting us read along for such an erotic ride. Seems like another chapter is called for ;) Cheers! --- Josie
That was a wonderful chapter of how to bring in the new year memorably. What a fun filled eve it was for lucky David. It's no wonder why he'll so taken in with his Mistress.
by
Anonymous04/13/15
this is so great
Please make this a really long series, this series is so amazing and i just love the story. Im excited to see Alice and Davids relationship develop.
I doubt you will see this, but if you do...I'm calling you out. You have commented on every one of my stories in recent months, even the older ones. You trash talk every single one of them, yet you read them each time a new story comes out. You always comment under Anonymous, because I believe...and I'm sorry to say this...you're a fucking pussy. I encourage you to talk to me, using your real username...go for it. I normally don't take offense when people give me bad reviews, and I'm not in any way saying that I have taken offense to anything you have said to me. However, I am annoyed with you. It seems you have it out for me, and trash talk what I write simply just to trash talk me. So...grow a pair, and drop the anonymous bullshit.
by
Anonymous01/27/16
Give me morw
Love the mistress Alice 3 part series will you be continuing the story as there are a few things that needs finalising for example like what happens after the deal expires does he continue to be Alice's slave or does he go back to staightville or maybe he goes of the rocks and finds a new shemale lover but doesn't feel right and begs for Alice back
Andy
just thought I'd check up on you with the new year approaching and all. I've re-read the three chapters you've written one more time. Something I don't do too often but this storyline is one of your best IMO. Hoping you'll add to it or complete it in some fashion in 2017? I write after reading your own comment and I'm hopeful/optimistic.
Best for the New Year!
Jann
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by WhiskeyIsGood
02/11/15
thanks Josie
English
5/5
lucky bugger..:)
Why do you hate me whiskey?
You KNOW how much I've been nagging you about a foursome, and you get the players together, 3 girls one guy, and you play it out as separate threesomes? I mean sure, depending on your definition being double-teamed while the third girl watches and/or plays with herself it could be called a foursome, but not in my book. Where's the scene where the ladies sit/stand next to eachother with him on the floor in the middle with one in his mouth and two in his hands? Where's the triple-teaming where he's being spitroasted only with an extra cock in his mouth or ass? Where's the triple simultaneous cumshot scene? Come on now, man!
Moving on from that though (hard as it may be...) I completely missed chapter 2 for some reason so I re-read the series from chapter 1, and I very much enjoyed it. I did kind of expect Terry from chapter 2 on the phone to be one of the girls here, though... Mistake, intentional set-up for a future chapter or completely unrelated to the plot?
I see some potential for an end-game story point in the 'Red' codeword from chapter 1 - just in case you forgot :). Basically something big happens, he says Red and walks away heartbroken, she fights to get him back and in doing so showing how much she cares for him. No idea what the 'something' would be though - hopefully not cheating but considering her job maybe that would be the easy route? Otherwise maybe just a conversation with a friend where she denies having any kind of real feelings for him out of embarrassment or whatever, he overhears and take it from there~.
5/5. Even without the foursome it's still a quality whiskey story.
lol sorry about that Lad_Russo
I am glad you enjoyed the story though. I thought it would be sexy to kind of have his Mistress watching as he's ganged up on by her friends...rest assured though, you will get your foursome. I can't say if it will be in this story or another, as I have many other ideas for other stories, and it might be nice to add that to one of those. But it will happen.
It's every submissive, power bottom's fantasy.
All that and not even a blowjob for his "troubles." ;3 I know, not exactly "throwing him into the briar patch," but... If you're gonna throw the kid a bone for a job (or "jobs" ;3) well-done, at the very least, let him get his dick wet (especially after loaning him out to a very well-endowed, and eager/too horny friend). Passive ejaculation is good, active ejaculation is better--just my opinion.
Love your writing.
another great chapter. Keep up the great writing. I love to see when you post the next chapter or start a new story . Hope to read more soon.
Big Fan
Killer12
Amazing!
It's a shame you're planning on making this a short series, I think it's my favourite yet. The completely dominant/top shemales are great. Hope you're planning to have more shemale Dommes in the future!
Glad This Has Been Such A Popular...
...Story in Whiskey's extensive library, as for obvious reasons it has been my favorite and he has continually humored me in my various 'suggestions'. In any case, thanks Whiskey for writing such a fun distraction, and letting us read along for such an erotic ride. Seems like another chapter is called for ;) Cheers! --- Josie
thanks Josie
Chapter 4 already in the works
Bringing in the New Year
That was a wonderful chapter of how to bring in the new year memorably. What a fun filled eve it was for lucky David. It's no wonder why he'll so taken in with his Mistress.
this is so great
Please make this a really long series, this series is so amazing and i just love the story. Im excited to see Alice and Davids relationship develop.
Wonderful story. Can't wait for more.
I love this story. Well done! I can't wait to see more and hope you take your time with it. Tease us a little and draw it out! Please. :D
Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations!!!
Go on sooo, please ;)
Lovely
It is exciting and well-written. Story could be developing in thenm continuing after the year is through.
please write more
This is as good or better thanks Jay's! Keep it up whiskey!
So bad
And so unbelievable its ludicrous.
Anon
I doubt you will see this, but if you do...I'm calling you out. You have commented on every one of my stories in recent months, even the older ones. You trash talk every single one of them, yet you read them each time a new story comes out. You always comment under Anonymous, because I believe...and I'm sorry to say this...you're a fucking pussy. I encourage you to talk to me, using your real username...go for it. I normally don't take offense when people give me bad reviews, and I'm not in any way saying that I have taken offense to anything you have said to me. However, I am annoyed with you. It seems you have it out for me, and trash talk what I write simply just to trash talk me. So...grow a pair, and drop the anonymous bullshit.
Give me morw
Love the mistress Alice 3 part series will you be continuing the story as there are a few things that needs finalising for example like what happens after the deal expires does he continue to be Alice's slave or does he go back to staightville or maybe he goes of the rocks and finds a new shemale lover but doesn't feel right and begs for Alice back
Andy
Mistress Alice... can't wait for more!
You've got a great story line here. I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
I'm hooked
I can't wait for the next installments. You have me invested in these characters. Bravo
Hi Whiskey is Good!
just thought I'd check up on you with the new year approaching and all. I've re-read the three chapters you've written one more time. Something I don't do too often but this storyline is one of your best IMO. Hoping you'll add to it or complete it in some fashion in 2017? I write after reading your own comment and I'm hopeful/optimistic.
Best for the New Year!
Jann
............
by WhiskeyIsGood
02/11/15
thanks Josie
Chapter 4 already in the works
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