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Mattie and Nellie

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by Anonymous

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by WriteOnGuy02/13/15

Cute Tail

It reminded me of the days when I used to ride a BSA. Have to admit it; I never had a hot Italian Babe with a hiked up skirt on the back - that came later with a different bike.

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by LordSlamdawgg02/13/15

Straightforward tale dashing to heated conclusion with minimal twists and turns

Not bad, but many elements of fantastic five star journey went unutilized. The twist aka postcard from the past had merit. I thoroughly enjoyed what was there and wish there was more . No use getting angry at the author, maybe he had a bus to catch.

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by impo_6002/13/15

1*, why?

The story isn't good...Just a man bragging about his alleged conquests, but the 1* was because the writer put an italian woman saying "J'arrive"...That is french...so maybe the man didn't know where he was...In italian it would be "sto arrivando"...1*

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by MrVdog02/13/15

1969 BSA

BSA never built a 900 - 441 and 500 singles, 500 and 650 twins, a 750 triple.. no 900.

Maybe you bought a Big Bore kit.

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by badidea21102/14/15

Thanks for reading

Thanks for the comments. Nice start with the pendantic take on BSAs. You shoulda taken this one up with my old man. He'd have bored you silly with the Small Heath details. Almost from the start BSA were making 900 + bikes (technically, their first bike came out in 1919 - and that one was much smaller, but my dad bought his first BSA as a 14-year-old in 1939 with his two elder brothers) I never saw that first one but it was a big bugger. My uncle remembered it as a 940+ and the archivists at Small Heath, where it was built confirm that size did exist. I'm sure you could google it. It really isn't an important detail.

Mattie was half-French. I believe I did tell you that in the story. I never asked her why she articulated her orgasmic moans in her other first language, but then I had other things on my own mind at the time. You REALLY need to get out more ;-)

Appreciate the comments but I don't think this is boasting - after all, most of us have had as many face slaps as acceptances when trying to seduce married women. It's just the face slap accounts aren't really suitable for Literotica as they usually don't have the desired result (although I've had a couple of surprising turnarounds that i might write up one day)..

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