Writing is very good except for one thing, a nitpick. Please read Strunk & White or Modern English Usage on *punctuation*. Specifically, learn when to use a semicolon instead of a comma. There are also some places which need commas and have no punctuation. Make the punctuation standard, and you will be writing professional publication quality material!
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Writing is very good except for one thing, a nitpick. Please read Strunk & White or Modern English Usage on *punctuation*. Specifically, learn when to use a semicolon instead of a comma. There are also some places which need commas and have no punctuation. Make the punctuation standard, and you will be writing professional publication quality material!
Continue please
Very sweet and refreshing to see the man in a non aggressive manner .
More please!
I sure hope you continue with this story! I really enjoyed it and now my panties are moist! Oh what to do? ;)
There had better be a chapter two......*twitch
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