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Wife Meets The New Boss Ch. 03

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by Whackdoodle02/10/15

Wh doesn't she just sue him?

She's clearly being blackmailed, even if she does want it then she can fuck him and get wealthy?

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by Anonymous02/10/15

dont wait so long for next chaptr

its great keep it going

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by Gaelic_Seanchai02/11/15

Six Years, 360 Days Later... You’re back! Welcome Home!

I don’t know where you have been or what took you so long, but it’s nice to see that you have finally come back to finish what you started. There’s great potential here, but there’s more that you can add to each new entry. Said if only because there was a whole lot more that you could have added to (a) the next morning, 02-08-2007, (b) the return visit, 02-15-2007 and (c) Ranger Ric, aka, Steve, 02-10-2015, which would have allowed you to expand the character’s depth, as well as their background/motivations/aspirations/et al in addition to your story’s arc/intrigue/dynamic/potential if only because your creative imagination deserves to find its voice in submissions that take more than one page to explore. If you want some input/suggestions/assistance, don’t hesitate to reach out to those of us who want you to succeed as a writer who has all the right stuff to keep your readers looking forward to each succeeding chapter’s potential. Sincerely, Ric, an Irishman whose Gaelic handle honors the proud traditions of the time tested talents of the Irish Storyteller that resides in all of us, regardless of one’s ethnic heritage.

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