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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/13/15

Shes reluctant to go to the party, but she's not reluctant about sleeping with the guy... I expected some more struggle, either with dialogue or her inner monologue.... She just automatically wanted to sleep with him when he said relax.

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by LitCrit02/13/15

Wrong Category!

How is this NonConsent/Reluctance ? She initiates the contact, and no one even whispers "no" ? Besides the category flaw, the story is poorly written, badly constructed, gives us no reason to care about any of the characters - I couldn't rate it above a 1.

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