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by Anonymous

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With a title like that, you would want to back it up. Well, first let me acknowledge your effort. I know its not easy writing a good story. There were several misspelled words, which interrupted the flow. We only got descriptions of breast sizes (36 & 38dd's) of the characters involved, which made it hard to visualize what they look like, let alone connect with them. Overall, the story felt rushed and underdeveloped. Please try again. Take your time and perhaps have an editor or friend proof read your stuff to help with structure and grammatical errors. All the best.

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by redlion7502/21/15

did the co-worker know she was coming over for a lesbian 3way or was it a shock?do they often fuck other women after a ong time apart from eachother?

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by Anonymous02/22/15

The title is a clear case of false advertising. This story left me closer to slumber than to orgasm.

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Godawful!

Another appalling entry from someone clearly underage.

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