See Jane Rub, See Jane Be A Slut, Rub Jane, Rub...
The_Lady_Within seems a tad bit presumptuous of a name. Perhaps you believe she is somewhere inside you but it isn't even hinted at in your masturbatory fantasies. This story is garbage. Please get an editor. There are some of us who still love the written word, and even though we may struggle with grammar and syntax at times, we strive to do honor to the English language.
Do you even understand the difference between porn and erotica? It isn't evidenced by your writing. This is supposed to be a category in which people post stories about "Women who love other women." (That's the description Literotica has for this section.) There is nothing in this story that even attempts to express that.
It isn't surprising that your other stories are BDSM and Incest/Taboo. So, please do us all a favor and keep this crap out of the one section that is actually here for "Women who love other women". You trolling for your Jolly Wankers is kinda embarrassing, so please, post this garbage in a section where you have readers who like this empty spiteful and heartless garbage. Most writers posting stories here have a standard they attempt to live up to. You, Sir, do not. Your attempts at "Lesbian Erotica" are insulting to women, gay women, bi-women and anybody else who is here to read and enjoy heartfelt and inventive erotica.
When the fuck will you dick-clutching idiots get a clue?
Not even worth the 1 star you'd get if I rated this story as awful.
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This is a great story, I love how high maintenance the slave girl is to the main character.
See Jane Rub, See Jane Be A Slut, Rub Jane, Rub...
The_Lady_Within seems a tad bit presumptuous of a name. Perhaps you believe she is somewhere inside you but it isn't even hinted at in your masturbatory fantasies. This story is garbage. Please get an editor. There are some of us who still love the written word, and even though we may struggle with grammar and syntax at times, we strive to do honor to the English language.
Do you even understand the difference between porn and erotica? It isn't evidenced by your writing. This is supposed to be a category in which people post stories about "Women who love other women." (That's the description Literotica has for this section.) There is nothing in this story that even attempts to express that.
It isn't surprising that your other stories are BDSM and Incest/Taboo. So, please do us all a favor and keep this crap out of the one section that is actually here for "Women who love other women". You trolling for your Jolly Wankers is kinda embarrassing, so please, post this garbage in a section where you have readers who like this empty spiteful and heartless garbage. Most writers posting stories here have a standard they attempt to live up to. You, Sir, do not. Your attempts at "Lesbian Erotica" are insulting to women, gay women, bi-women and anybody else who is here to read and enjoy heartfelt and inventive erotica.
When the fuck will you dick-clutching idiots get a clue?
Not even worth the 1 star you'd get if I rated this story as awful.
Erin
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