well most of the readers do not want to be part of your story.... try and keep readers as readers and characters in the story as characters in the story.
I don't normally care for sub men stories...they do nothing for me...but this one did. A little problem with third and first person but otherwise very enjoyable. looking forward to more ...
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disagree w/previous
I disagree with the previous anonymous person. I rather enjoyed being in the story. Matter of preference, I suppose.
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well most of the readers do not want to be part of your story.... try and keep readers as readers and characters in the story as characters in the story.
Very nice
I don't normally care for sub men stories...they do nothing for me...but this one did. A little problem with third and first person but otherwise very enjoyable. looking forward to more ...
disagree w/previous
I disagree with the previous anonymous person. I rather enjoyed being in the story. Matter of preference, I suppose.
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