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Wonderful Start!
I really enjoyed what I hope is only the beginning of this story. Unique angle, and nicely written! This really left me wanting more.
MastersWench
Yummy!
She's not the only one dripping wet! More, pretty please, maybe a longer chapter next time? Soon, I hope?
Lovely
You had me at Callebaut, Yank. Nicely written, and very tidy. I can't wait to read more. Thank you.
Excellent!
I love it, MWY! What happens next??
well craftted
excellent craftsmanship, good tension. i was reminded of anais nin while reading.
The way you set the scene, so casual, yet so deeply intimated, is masterful.
Not to mention crazy hot!!!
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