A Gift From His Father Ch. 23

Awesome!

Looks like the good doctor has reached his limits, his control seems to be weakening. And to use a chess metaphor looks like John left his queen unprotected. I can't wait to see what happens next.

OMG 5* again

YOU sure know how to end a chapter. I can only hope you have the next chapter waiting or at least at the editors. One of my favorite stories so I hope your creative juices are flowing, lol
ty/bill

Again

Firstly, loved the chapter. But Urggh, Now I have to wait! Thank you for continuing this wonderful series.

mmmm interesting

John may be in the wrong place, I don't think the doctor is going to get all his own way
Look forward to the next installment. Many thanks for continuing, A 5

Can't wait for the next chapter! Though it's gotten to be so long, and has so many characters, that it can be hard to remember who is who.

Hot

very hot story cant waite for the next installment

awesome

Each part of story is awesome .
Just craving for your next part
hope john is disguised as Mary would be fun and john could wear ring of vengeance

Author of intrigue

I always know I found an author who is intriguing when I steal time from my responsibilities to keep reading. I'm waiting anxiously for the next segment!

Superb

I have really enjoyedo this story up to now. Can't wait till the next installment. What a concept and what a story.

Jimmc

Great job. Hope to see more soon.

On the way!

Chapter 24 is in my editor's hands. Should be published in a week or so. Chapter 25 is looking very good.

Keep it coming!!!

This the the best I've read. Your skills and story line are the best I've ever come across!

Chapter 24

Thanks for your patience, chapter 24 has been uploaded. You should see it soon. Chapter 25 is almost complete. It will be a long one. Thanks for reading my stories.

Sorry for the Delay!

Thanks for your patience. The story is finished and ready to post, but I am having problems doing so. I got locked out of my account, but cleared that hurdle. Spent several hours trying to get it into the Literotica format. But it didn't take. So, bare with me. I will get it loaded.

second time reading this story

this is the second time i have read this story and i love it as much the first time as i do the second time reading it great plot likeable characters evean the "bad" guy are likeable i mean they are the bad guy but they are not like some that you just hate them these bad guys are likeable they are just bad

Much fewer errors

I finally realized that your stories are now fun to read. You must have found a good editor and please thank him for me. I no longer have to puzzle out what you meant when the spelling errors or incorrect words pull me up short.
Your stories now flow and I can get immersed in them. I plan to enjoy the last few chapters.