All Comments on 'My Eyes Are Closed'

Awesome!! More please!!!

I loved this one. I rarely give five stars but I'd like to give this one a ten.

Sequel please.........................

Amazing story. So well written. Can't wait to read more from the author.

I am so wet after reading this, I wish my brother would fuck me like that. Mmmmm here's hoping.

but PLEASE You really want us to believe that they thought he slept through all the pic taking #REALLY

PS

"Polaroid Camera" in 2015 really

enjoyed the read. you should continue with the story.

However they had to be pretty dumb to think he was asleep the whole time and he had to have a will of iron to stay still.

Now they have the rest of the week to play around and he and his sister have a lifetime.

Fantastic story!! You must continue it on since the folks are away!

The word is "taut" not "taught."

This story should continue for the next two weeks... (at least)

He should snag a copy of the photos, too!

every young man has a dream like this

Fantastic and sexy and erotic as hell story! Have the girls finger his butthole next while his sister blows him.

The one thing that was missing was a whisper.

Nancy gets down, and all he says is "better than my dreams"

The hooting and hollering that would have followed wouldve rocked my jollies harder than a Scorpions album

LOVE THIS STORY! It was hot, erotic and built well in the rhythm. I do hope you continue this story line.

nuf said

only someone 13 or under would believe this possible even if drugged or blackout drunk. And if that drunk, there would be no erections. Nor would he be able to hold off his own climax during multiple blow jobs and being ridden by three women through their own orgasms while he is pretending to be asleep.

I call BS

Loved this short story, you have talent for writing some seriously hot scenes, great job.

Just loved the story, please continue it on to the next morning and what has opens between the brother and sister

Very good. Please continue it with just Nancy and her brother

Definetely continue this story Please. With the sister and Erin. They would all have fun together.

But you need an editor. Too many wrongly spelled words ia distracting.

It's ANTE, not ANTY.

You meant FAZED,

And you mix up YOUR with YOU'RE both ways.

This was actually really good!!!

More! Now with Nancy's first anal.

the only reason I can think of for him falling asleep on the floor with three beautiful, naked, and willing young ladies in the room.

A fun romp w a happy ending. I found this to be an enjoyable story. Much better than a simple bump-n-squirt episode. I think this is complete all by itself but there is the possibility of further explorations between the four of them.

Thank you for sharing your creative efforts with us!

I really enjoyed the story, and want more. I think there is room for more between the brother and sister along with her friends.

Like everyone else said this was great! I definitely would be interested in more to the story! Hope u can think of more

Great story. Definitely needs to finish out the week with a daily story.

Then jacked off..Love to hear a story of the morning after

So, since I have a tendency to like so many stories, I tend to look back at ones I have read and re-read them. Having read this one more than a few times already, I thought I would post a comment. This is quite the entertaining one-off story. I do hope that a potential sequel to it is in the offing. It has such potential with the four characters. You have done great work with your other pieces, and I know you could turn this into more if you desired to. If not, well at least we have this story to read or re-read in my case lol.

with the others about this being an amazing story and would love to see a sequel if you ever feel the need someday. I also just finished re-reading this, the first time was months ago lol, always did enjoy it though and it definitely has potential to be made into a series here. But as others have said, even if you don't, it's still an amazing story and is fine as a one-off, though if you ever continue it I'll read and reread the next part(s) for sure! Sure there were some spelling / grammar errors here and there but it wasn't enough to really detract from the story. I'd much rather have a good, quality story with a few editing mistakes here and there any day of the week over a story with no errors but isn't written well. You're a great writer, loe this and your other works, keep it up!

Loved it it made me quite wet reading it. Bj xo

Loved it, I will certainly be re-reading it. Perfect length and level of detail. Good writing and look forward to reading more of your stuff. Well done!

Very good story, intense escalation but well done. Thank you

Dude I wish some shit like this had happened to me as a high school kid lol

Sorry don't see where the non-con is, it's not even dubious.

The brother was awake the whole time and the girls chose to do what they did. Even in final act the sister had a choice.

I think I would summon a 2 word response to anyone complaining about non-con and it would have 3 'f's in it...

Reminds me of a time with a sister's friend, just one and no sister, but you gotta love big sister's friends ;)

Got 5 stars from me, good bit of harmless fun had by all.

what happened in the morning? next chapter?

Time for Part 2..or beyond!!

Now, you really need to start writing again . . . please

Very nice. be nice to read more.

Hot enough 4 a 5!

Bill S.

Fun und Sexy!

10/10!!!!!

Hair woman bald girl!!

As a few stories said also adds to scent

Read it again, still love it

Great story, though he should have whispered to his sister at the very end that wanted copies of the photos. 'all the photos"

Anonymous, I was just thinking why he didn't fuck Amanda's and Erin's brains out until they knocked out and just before Nancy knocks out from the pleasure ask "so can I get all the photos now please".

That's what I've been doing wrong with women -- being awake!

Loved it. But I agree with others who said he should have asked for the photos. In doing so we bring it full circle and at the same it lets then know he was awake the whole time.

>not to bury the lead,

Just fyi, it's spelled 'lede', not lead.

Good premise.

But sex was rushed. Too automatic. Too mechanical.

Needed much more in the way of preliminaries. Lots of using their hands to play with his cock AND balls. Teasing him. Needed for them to marvel at his physical reactions to being played with.

The word is not ANTY - it's ANTE.

You need to learn the difference among YOUR and YOU'RE.

Four stars.

Great story.

Super hot story, and very well written. I really like the fact that you don't mention cup sizes and dick-lengths that most often mar or ruin erotic stories.

And more chapters, please!

I wasn’t sure about the set up, but you made it work. Also. Very hot, very nice.

I also appreciate you skipping “these are their measurements and here’s how big I am” ect. Always feels like a laundry list being checked off xD

This lets me learn what characters look like without it turning into a fact list xD

There is a whole week the parents are gone and that's all we get? The story just stops with no real ending. Disappointing it doesn't continue.