Hey, this is the author, Shaneo here. I would love to recieve some feedback guys! I'm always looking to improve my writing and provide the best stories possible. Thank you if you have commented already
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Anonymous03/15/15
You need an editor!
'You basted!' It's bastard.
You have to check your use of then and than, every time its meant to be THAN you use then. Those are just a few errors.
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great work
I enjoy reading your story, I do wish they were longer... But nonetheless you have a great talent. Looking forward to more :)
Can't wait!!
I'm very excited of how this is gonna turn out..!
This is awesome!
I'm thrilled to see what happens next. The characters are so likeable already! I hope for more soon.
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Noooooo
Omg i love it!!! Need more please!!!
From the author...
Hey, this is the author, Shaneo here. I would love to recieve some feedback guys! I'm always looking to improve my writing and provide the best stories possible. Thank you if you have commented already
You need an editor!
'You basted!' It's bastard.
You have to check your use of then and than, every time its meant to be THAN you use then. Those are just a few errors.
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