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Olive's Oral Ordeal

bybubblearseman©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/19/15

Too stupid to read

Stopped reading when I saw her name was Sweetstuff. Stupid!!

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by bubblearseman02/19/15

Stupid?

Let me get this right anonymous: you commented about a story that you haven't read?
Hmmmm, that's REALLY STUPID!

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by gordo1202/19/15

Yes stupid

The story is beyond stupid.
1* cause it reduces your overall average

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by gordo1202/19/15

And BTW

I couldn't get past the 1/2 point myself

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by Anonymous02/19/15

Amusing bit of silliness.

Enjoyed it for what it is. It doesn't pretend to be anything else, so it's getting a good star rating from me.

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by Anonymous02/20/15

Part 2?

I liked the story, give us more

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by Anonymous02/20/15

It's a fun "Fuck story"

It's Fun, makes no pretense of being anything but a good, old fashioned, fuck story, which, quite frankly, is what I come to Literotica for. If I want high literature, I'll read Shakespeare. Wish it had been a bit longer with more detail about her later adventures.

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