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Anonymous02/21/15
Great story
I enjoyed your story please continue to write. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.
I notice there's a habit by many writers to say "she began to" "he started to" ... once or twice is fine, but after that get off it and just say what happens.
Can't really fault the young lady for going after old cock, especially when the married assholes dis their wives so quickly.
I suppose it's just fantasy, but the idea of a young woman preying on married men intent to fuck them doesn't do much for me.
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thst es hot as hell hry babe im a dude we should meet some time and fuck.respond back and ill meet you whereevr you want if you wsnt to meey if not then ok thst cool.
Great story
I enjoyed your story please continue to write. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.
Condom
He and she forgot to use condoms.
began, started to ... just write
I notice there's a habit by many writers to say "she began to" "he started to" ... once or twice is fine, but after that get off it and just say what happens.
Can't really fault the young lady for going after old cock, especially when the married assholes dis their wives so quickly.
I suppose it's just fantasy, but the idea of a young woman preying on married men intent to fuck them doesn't do much for me.
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